Absolutely adorable! And sweet! 3

AW! That was the cutest story ever! The last chapter was so sweet! I can just imagine Shikamaru and Gaara crying over a baby. So cute! I loved this story! You did a great job with it! :)

-Yvonne

That was beautifully written. I actually thought it was gonna have lemons but then I remembered it's rated t. XD

I'm in love with your prose and I'm only two chapters in. There's such an effortless, understated beauty about it. The characterization is wonderful too and I'm shedding a tear at Shikamaru and Temari's chemistry. I'm so glad you've completed this story!

I love this

This...is one of the absolute best ShikaTema fanfictions I have ever read.

Everything about this was absolutely WONDERFUL. How in-character it was, the nice little character introspections, the sweetness of their relationship, the way their relationship began...not to mention how you managed to have the perfect blend of humor and seriousness available in every chapter. (No, seriously, I had to keep from busting out laughing every chapter!)

Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful piece. This is definitely going on my favorites. Keep up the GREAT work!

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL
Thank you so much for writing this story!
IT WAS BEAUTIFUL.
BEAUTIFUL!
THANK YOU!

This was really a fun ride! Thank you for writing and sharing this. The whole bantering was my favorite. They sound soooo like THEM and something that they could've done.

Why'd you called it Catch 22? I LOVE YOUR STORY! T.T

"Paranoid, over-affectionate, baby-talking psychopath." that's how I would imagine Temari would be with Shikamaru the "crybaby". brilliant story. what a look for in a story good plot/theme/characterization /grammar/sentence construction/direction and message this one covered all. congratulations and keep on writing you are an inspiration.

LOL! big fan of this story. I love especially how they are in character .

What a beautiful ending! Amazing job with this story, it was an incredible read ! :D

Yay they're going to have a kid! :)
wonderful job with the writing! I was so so so scared you were going to have Shikamaru injured on the mission, or have the missing nin secretly being after a pregnant Temari the whole time, but I'm so so so glad that they just get their happy ending : -)

Awww I feel so bad for Temari thinking she's not good enough :( AMAZING WRITING STYLE! You're dialogue is perfect and I can totally imagine the characters acting how you portray them :)

Excellent writing, I'm completely interested :) Can't wait to read the rest!