Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next!

Fluff? The next chapter is fluff? Please tell me there will at least be interation between Temari and Shikamaru. Somehow, somewhere.

Oddly enough, I fear I'm now addicted to your writing, and this story. I can't wait for the next chapter, so good luck.

I was about to scream through my computer screen that there must be another chapter...and wow, I'm glad I didn't do that since there is a 2nd chapter...it sure came fast.

Anyhow, onto reviewing chapter 1.

The story: Shikamaru is portrayed well in this story, I like that he's approachable and charming with his friends. And just plain charming in general. Temari is awesome in this story as well, I also love how she handles Shikamaru.

*Added to fave list FOREVER*

Yes, by all means, please continue!.

This was sad! More please!

Please continue! I really like it so far. Are you really drunk?

I loved it. Don't end there. Continue! Please!

Love the story can't wait for more :)

You write pretty well when you're drunk. XD Anyway, great story so far, can't wait to see what happens next!

I think you should continue. I'd like to see how they resolve the problem :]

And I love your writing style, it's totally better than the people that have no clue what the word grammar means.

And drunkenness is only bad in the morning Hope the hangover doesn't kill you.

This is god! Temptes as i am to see how ridiculous it can be, i like it as it is. Maybe get more or less drunk, and then right some more?

very good,luv it

i loved it

and i think they don't have to get merred

stay this way its better

aw (sniff) poor shikamaru, i hope they find a way to be happy i really think you should go on i really like it so far! :D