Reviews for Unexplainable bitterness
Celestinasong chapter 6 . 1/15/2014
Omg funniest line ive ever read in a fic. Youre drooling on me! Not cute. Lol
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 9 . 8/14/2012
Omg haha that omake was hilarious! XD
Darkness chapter 9 . 6/13/2012
This was such a Wonderful Story. I couldn't. Stop laughing when kakashi was drooling on iruka sensei. (Poor sensei). :0. I'm Buggs Bunny: "I Like It"
ActuallyNevis chapter 9 . 5/6/2011
Very good, I liked the story a lot! :-)
bbb136 chapter 9 . 1/10/2011
This was so nice to read. :)

OOCness was at an absolute minium so well done there. And I thought you did a pretty good job of Kakashi being drunk, I found it funny at least. -

I did spot a few mistakes and errors which can only really come by accident. If it's okay with you, I'd like to beta this story. Drop me a line if you're interested.
Pigeonina chapter 9 . 12/16/2010
I'm so glad I found this! I had started reading it on TONFA and it hadn't been updated in a while... I just happened to come across your other fic, bathhouse Revelations and I thought your screenname seemed familiar. I am so relieved and happy to have been able to read an ending to unexplainable bitterness, I really am! Great stories, your grammar isn't perfect but the meat of the story is really really good. So nothing a little tweaking can't fix. I'm sure you're out of the KakaIru loop since it's been years since this was posted, but regardless... Good job!
briar-moss-thorn chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
I like how you ended this. It leaves you guessing how it will all end. I don't think there is a happy ending in there for Iruka myself. I think Kakashi is the kind of man that will give everything he has to the relationship but ultimately find himself not being able to fall all the way in love because like he said. he is a straight man.
SpazKitty chapter 9 . 6/21/2010
had a sit down and read the whole thing through. I liked it very much. Drunk Kakashi mostly, and all the emotions. Awesome :)
TheEndofTag chapter 9 . 10/19/2009
wow!...a brillant and entertaing peice of work...i totally enjoyed reading it immensly...it was just love!..espcially to see a drunk kakashi to iruka hiding from kakashi and finally kakashi giving flowers to iruka...it was a wonderuflly written story...i love it!
Jennifer chapter 9 . 9/1/2009
Wow. That was incredible. Unlike most of what I have read. Definatley a great thing. I loved the "knowledge" part. Made me laugh silly. Thanks for writing it. I look forward to reading more of your writing.
kitten chapter 9 . 6/29/2009
Refreshingly well written piece of fiction. I loved the story from the beginning to the end. You developed the relationship between the main characters somehow very naturally. Good God, I like your work too much.
xxasianicexx chapter 9 . 6/2/2009
aww that is so sweet!
Seshat7 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I just love these odd-ball couple. And the way you write about them, even makes them more endearing to me. I love your work. Gokurou!
Tishu chapter 9 . 3/21/2009
Ohmygod I loved it...Nothing short of...blissful...
fireflieshaveadd chapter 9 . 9/28/2008
it should have been a hasty finish, but the last paragraph satisfied the plot conclusion. So... yay. a few spelling errors, such as 'subtle' but i liked it. to rephrase, Yay.
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