|Reviews for Within Temptation|
| sexyhunter chapter 18 . 8/8/2007
Great chapter, ajn! So, the creature's going after guys that look like Blake? Can't wait to find out what that's all about. And come on, now...we want some Brooke/Sammy sex! PLEASE! :) Looking forward to the next update.
| Angevin69 chapter 2 . 8/7/2007
Hey, great job!
OMG, I'm looking forward to the next chapter of your story, as much as I am to supernatural itself!
You're doing such a fantastic job.
A little request though,
wouldn't it be better if things heated up with Dean and Ariel.
I mean, an intense juicy chapter would keep us all glued and very much anticipating the next chapter.
It's just a suggestinon (:
| Ty3 chapter 18 . 8/5/2007
Another great chapter. I'm a little sad we missed hearing about Sam carrying Brooke into the hotel and his thoughts about her in his arms, but I'm sure we'll get a lot of great scenes between them. I look forward to Dean/Ariel moments in the next chapter.
| VagrantCandy chapter 18 . 8/5/2007
Good old dependable Sam...you're such a tease, lol.
| dannylover934 chapter 18 . 8/5/2007
Oh, those two need to get their act together! They are so oblivious. Love the chapter and can't wait to see how Ariel and Dean are getting along.
| Duffster21 chapter 18 . 8/5/2007
coffee sounds good
update soon plz
| VagrantCandy chapter 17 . 7/31/2007
Yay, return to home sweet home! And Ariel has a good chance of getting her vision back. I think this is as close to a 'happy chapter' as we've had in a while...
I'm sure your new home and you will be getting along just fine. Personally I don't think I could live alone very well; I'm too much of a people person...So, still living out of a suitcase?
| bb1028 chapter 17 . 7/31/2007
great chapter, great story, i really love your characters.. can't wait for the next update )
| sexyhunter chapter 17 . 7/31/2007
Fantastic story, ajn! I just caught up with the last few chapters and all I can say is...when is the next chapter going to be ready? Hurry and get busy writing, love!
I adore the girls, they are perfect for our Winchester boys. So, Dean and Ariel are off to Canada - how's Liri going to help Ari get her sight back? Can't wait to know what happens next.
You are such a talented writer. The right amount of detail, excellent storyline. Well done! :)
| Duffster21 chapter 17 . 7/30/2007
i think i would react the same way as both of those girls
in both situations
| Ty3 chapter 17 . 7/30/2007
Splitting up, huh? Something tells me that will enable our favorite pairs to have some "special" moments. Sweet!
| Ty3 chapter 16 . 7/26/2007
Man, even monsters have a thing for Dean.
| zombiemoonbeam chapter 16 . 7/26/2007
I loved it!
| VagrantCandy chapter 16 . 7/24/2007
Nice little clarification chapter here. Let me guess, the thing is posing as Lone during the day? Or maybe that annoying drunk girl...
I trust the move is going well?
| supernaturalfan16 chapter 16 . 7/24/2007
great chapter, cant wait to see what happens next.