|Reviews for The Strength of One Will: Link's Origin|
| Hylia'grace chapter 11 . 1/15/2013
Fantastic story and beautifully written! Definatly one of my favorites
| arrowriver chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
As I was reading the last part, I thought of what I would do in that situation.
I'd be holding the baby, of course.
As the owl stopped talking, I would point and shout, "HOLY CRAP, IT'S A TALKING OWL!"
The baby of course would be held with the arm that's not holding him.
I'd probably wouldn't put my finger down for quite some time either. XD
| Truth Questor chapter 11 . 8/18/2008
That was a nice ending. :) Throughout this story, you've maintained excellent spelling and punctuation. I liked the dialogue, too; it reminds me of the kind of dialogue I tend to use. Thank you for your contribution. :)
| Truth Questor chapter 9 . 8/18/2008
Wow. What a horrible turn of events.
There's a couple places in this chapter where you spelled Juro's name as "Jora".
| Truth Questor chapter 4 . 8/18/2008
Nice use of verbally-expressed emotion. :(
| Truth Questor chapter 3 . 8/18/2008
Nice use of the prophecy to decide Link's name. I suspected that might be the case when I read the last chapter.
Poor Salydia! I find it a little odd that she believed Queen Zelda's less-than-authoritative answer so easily... Perhaps that's what she wanted to believe?
| Truth Questor chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
I like your dialogue. The pace is rather fast, but I like it that way. :) I also think it's cool how Link is the son of nobility.
I found only one thing I'd change: Should there be the word "you" inserted in this sentence? "He'll love YOU just as much as your mama does!"
| AshRB chapter 11 . 7/4/2008
I can't beleive I haven't read this before, seeing as how The Ocarina of Time is my favorite game ever and your my favorite fanfiction author. I always wondered what happened to Link's parents and all the mothers. Awesome story!
| b4k4 ch4n chapter 11 . 3/17/2008
The ending made me cry. Gosh, you wrote it really well. A beautiful way of concluding this story.
Sos, when you actually play the game, you don't realize how dangerous Stalchilds are in real life. Then again, th first time I saw them was when I was about 10 and I was deathly scared of them xD I liked how you wrote the 'Clunk. Clunk. Clunk' noises. It added a nice effect to the story.
Nice work! Really enjoyed reading this.
| Genkl chapter 11 . 1/7/2008
Sorry I didn't log in the first time I reviewed. I'm adding this story on my favs.
| Genkl chapter 11 . 12/2/2007
That was a wonderful story! I like how you focused your writing on different characters instead of Link and Zelda. Good job!
| Ekoaleko chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
(still on my reviewing rampage.)
I'm not really one for Zelda games because I SUCK at freestyle RPGs. I think the most I've gone through is the Four Swords Legend I played with my brother.
I don't even recognize half the names, but... it's so well-written that it makes me go grar. True, I've only read the first and last chapters, but the level of awesomeness in it is just pulse-pounding. By the way, is Deku Tree a... tree? Er, I remember it being a tree. Well, Deku TREE, but, y'know. You never know.
| Linkofhyrule chapter 11 . 6/18/2007
That was tragic but I liked it. I'd like to know who hyrule was facing and why. It made me feel sorry for Link. But you did a wonderful job.
| EmpKaylenatye chapter 11 . 5/31/2007
Yea! What a wonderful way to end the story.
| Dark Raku chapter 11 . 5/30/2007
Aww its over. Excellent story all the way through, in all aspects. Thanks for making the story.