Reviews for Carmelita's Thoughts
Remedy's Melody chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
tht was wonderful!
Mellarkey chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww :) that was soooo sweet. It almost made me cry! oh yeah and this kaiser scott guy is coming back I guess...after 2 years? Well, I'm prepared for battle :P
Darkmark149 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Nice work
Claire Cooper chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
good is there a next chapter.
AverageGeekyFanFiccer chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
Very good! 'flirtatious buffoon'... Ha ha.
Simba Kid chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
Not bad at all. My only suggestion: don't worry about rhyming lines if they make the poem less flowing. Poetry isn't really my thing, so don't take this too seriously. It might make it a little better, but that's just my opinion. Good job overall. Keep writing!

Simba out.

P.S. Kaiser Scott doesn't like the Sly/Carmelita idea because it's not Carmelita/Himself. He is the perfect example of an egomaniac. Ignore his comments, or argue with him via PM's. That's what I did, and it gave me quite a chuckle. That bitch is crazy as well as self-obsessed!
Valin Dymos chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
Wow that kaiser guy flamed you for this. He's a jerk. Anyway very cool poem I liked it alot.
GirlNextDoor228 chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
Aww I love it! Sweet poem :)
SventheCrusader chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
I say great, just as your other was. And don't worry about Scott. I've already added it to my personaly agenda to kick him in the downbeat for every flame he writes. ;)