Reviews for Masquerade
Joezette chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
This story is damn good! Oh, how i love the Allorina and Jameth character! And the story is perfect, surely my favourite type.

Please keep writing!
Ellie-ellie chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
-squeals like a rabid fan girl-

gahh that was so cute!

-gives cookie-
Damien T. Wolf chapter 1 . 1/3/2007

Excellent! A very very nice read. Your writing style rivals that of the best I've seen so far. You wrote smoothly, established character depth, not with Jameth at first but using a story-timed flashback to explain childhood influences was a masterful idea. You took out stereotypes of everyone looking like pin-up models but made it look like how adventurers would most likely look or act like. You created a RO-based world that only helped establish the atmosphere for the story. I could go on but I don't have time coz I want to read it again. Masterful work. I'm expecting more from you in the future.