Reviews for Deception
YukinaUzuha chapter 12 . 4/15/2014
Where are you!? I know I'm being selfish ._. But why aren't you updating !? I have waited long enough...well actualy this is my first time reading this and I love it! Please update and don't give up on this story. I need you Author San ...I mean I don't need you as in physically cause that be wierd since this is my first time reviewing ,but I need you ...to update :)

Sincerely, Selfish girl who still waits for an update.
pw.grump chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
is this story abandoned?
why is it stopped at chapter 12?
I hope you will continue your story because i like this story.
XxxALIENWING-CHANxxX chapter 12 . 12/16/2013
pls continue
Master-of-Masters chapter 10 . 6/26/2013
Right, now I feel like an ass and really stupid too,just ignore my earlier review...please...
Master-of-Masters chapter 9 . 6/26/2013
I like your story but there is a bit of a plot hole, in one of the earlier chapters (number 3) you said Shino had a girlfriend who had graduated a year earlier and I just wanted to point it out to you. Good work on the story, Ja Ne!
naruko.uzuma chapter 12 . 4/29/2013
continue pls
KuroKanashimi chapter 5 . 4/7/2013
you had a great yuri one shot chance with that note thing... & -.- 'pfft' add yuri... you have soo much yaoi
AnjoRemix chapter 12 . 1/12/2013
wow O.O I like how the history blends the three race but then the Hebi descendants hmm I can only think of one person who would be around o.O btw it's been 5 years O.O
I see you see chapter 12 . 1/6/2013
Sorry that I haven't reviewed earlier ;P

Great story btw soo cute I especially live the chibi moments and the couples moments. I didn't see the nenjishika but it was great either way.

LOL near the end of the chapter I had the song UTMOST TENSION from the Vampire Knight soundtrack playing and couldn't help thinking how perfect it sounded for the situation
Guest chapter 12 . 7/12/2012
can you please continue this story iLOVEIT!PREEEEETTTYYYY !IIIIIIIIII !
katherine chapter 12 . 5/21/2012
did i not tell you to hurry up. plase.i beg of you.i'm literally begging on my knees
katherine chapter 12 . 5/19/2012
awsome awesome awesome awesome the most awesome story in the whole universe. hurrry upppppppppppppp nadddddddddd make the otherrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr !i'm going crazy!please!i !
sorafallenangel11 chapter 12 . 5/12/2012
I asolutely love this story! I'm guessing that Orochimaru is the cause of the hebi scent? Update soon!
mistralle chapter 3 . 4/16/2012
Oh, what's the big deal, how one dresses? Haku was a boy, who dressed girl-like way. In the wold of ninja, deception is the key - why should some jounin dictate a girl how to dress - unless she is going on a mission where she has to seduce someone. So, no, I don't feel like it's a plausible plot-twist.
Sakura Ichigo Morihiko chapter 12 . 3/16/2012
Well, sounds like Orochimaru is gonna go after Naru for her father while trying to kill Sasuke because of his ancestors.

Joy.
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