|Reviews for The Ties That Bind|
| Ashamaphone chapter 1 . 6/12
"I wonder what's gotten into her...p
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 5 . 4/25
| velvetsins chapter 3 . 2/13
Children are so pure and innocent… Love Ryoo and Pooja so much in this fic. They were such sweethearts when they swore to keep their secret. It would be much easier to tell everyone and really who wouldn’t believe them? It’s so clear the two of them are in love.
And their curiosity about his lightsaber is so, so funny. OMFG.
“Yes, love. I have played with his lightsaber. And I quite enjoyed the experience.” Padmé is such a bad auntie. Such a bad auntie HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
And the Naberries are such a family. I can’t stop laughing with their suggestions about Padmé and Anakin together. Really, how can people not notice them?
“I do not ogle, young lady. I appreciate.” Mrs Naberrie is surely the best! Love this woman! But sometimes I hate her motherly tracts. It’s funny to read and watch a parent trying to pair another character up, but it’s so annoying when it happens to you. And all the embarrassment. All the times you want for the whole to swallow you up. Ugh. I hate it with my entire being.
“Do not mistake that for blind allegiance…” Ah, Anakin… Needless to comment this further. But I do like Ruwee and Anakin interaction very much. Time for some bonding between father-in-law and son-in-law. And only god knows how much Anakin needed such encouraging words about himself. It’s easy to think he was a gullible character and that chose the easy way out, but when we think closely about his character he was extremely naïve and believed in people too much. Believed they were all good and really… who can judge him? It’s not like the Jedi Order taught anyone better. It’s not like they understood him or even tried to.
Now… that lemon. It was something else entirely. MY GOODNESS, WHAT A LEMON!
And the ending… Ah the ending…
I gotta go now, when I've some time I'll come back to review chapter 4 and 5
| velvetsins chapter 2 . 2/13
Pooja and Ryoo are possibly the best children ever. So adorable and with the right amount of devilishness in them. Impossible not to love them endlessly (and laugh endlessly as well)
"Does Anakin ever let you play with his lightsaber?" I read that when I was going to work, in the train, you have no idea how hard I laughed. I think everyone thinks now I’m a bit dysfunctional (not that they’re wrong, but…)
And really what is it with parents and their needs to get their children a so called soulmate? When I read this fic I got so mad with Padmé at the end of it all… But I’ll talk about it when I get there. I know Ruwee has only the best interests at heart, but it’s so frustrating.
Anakin and Padmé’s quarrels (at this point) are so funny and cute to read. Impossible not to love them, right? It’s good to see a light side of their relationship, there are some fics that depict only the drama and the bad things (not that I don’t like a good drama and angst, but I think you’re my favorite author when it comes to portraying the light side of their relationship).
Sola is really, really the best sister ever. HAHAHAHAHA I couldn’t stop laughing with her suggestive comments. Really, I don’t know how they managed to get away with this marriage for so long. Probably the biggest inconsistency in the entire SW universe.
Anakin’s uses of the force would be so harshly judged by Obi-Wan. Tsk. Tsk. But the scene with Pooja and Ryoo was so adorable I couldn’t help but smile all the time while reading it. It’s a pity we’ve never got to see him as a father to the twins, I bet he would be adorable with them and spoil them rot.
The line “What if the Sith Lord if from Naboo?” is so funny. Ah the irony.
It was a very precious chapter. Loved every line of it.
| velvetsins chapter 1 . 2/13
It’s been such a long time since you have last posted something for the SW fandom, so I don’t know if you’ll see these reviews, but well… your fics are so amazingly written I can’t help myself. It’s been a few days since I’ve read them, but only now I had the time to leave a proper review.
First of all, your writing is superb, and I love how sweet and mature you can make their relationship in your fics. It’s so refreshing and so adorable all the same! Love it very much.
And your lemons are something to commend for, so well written and passionate and everything a reader can expect of a smut. Just with the right amount of the psychological and emotional side as well. I simply love them.
Needless to mention Sola is the best sister ever!
This fic is a gem. Truly.
Now, let me review the next chapter!
| Paul Lenzen chapter 5 . 9/19/2017
so damn good
| Sfloresf chapter 3 . 8/3/2017
LOVED this story! WOW! I had to read it twice... I LOVE Anakin's humor is this story.
Many forget that Anakin was a young man. But very passionate.
Great Job Shawn 30 :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/9/2017
Hah. He was right
the sith Lord is from naboo. Palpatine is so evil.
| Mr. Invincible chapter 4 . 1/22/2017
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2017
I'd like to see this Story on movie. Please mr Lucas!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2017
Can I just say that this was fucking beautiful? By the time I got to the end I was tearing up, that's how amazingly written and heart wrenching this story was. Wherever you are, keep on doing what you're doing
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/1/2017
This was deliciously done! I've read several of your works. Your Anidala writing is simply divine. I love the humor you infuse in your stories. I hope you will return to the SW Anidala or even Vader/Amidala genre! Have you considered doing a modern AU Anidala? I believe it would be a true masterpiece, if you did! I hope to see more of your work in 2017!
| ThunderSphinx chapter 5 . 12/8/2016
Great story. And it's so sad, knowing what will happen to them! :(( I always want to fry whenever I think about it!
| Alt.Karmic chapter 5 . 7/28/2016
I loved everything about this!
| fireatwill27 chapter 5 . 6/20/2016
This is a wonderful piece of writing. I spent my day yesterday reading this and it was such a great way to spend my time. I want you to know that your work is such a great section of the PT fandom and while I'm many years behind, I am so glad I get to read it.