|Reviews for Echoes of Power, Part I: Anger|
| FreelanceBum chapter 12 . 3/22/2013
Nice-nice is also typically said patronizingly to a younger person. Surprise there isn't such a term in British English.
| FreelanceBum chapter 11 . 3/21/2013
That is an awesome version of goblins. I whole heartily agree with it.
| Griffin Raven chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
I'm definitely can't wait to see what will happen during the prank war between Harry & the twins, but also just what Ginny, Hermione, Lavander & Pravtia might try to do towards
Harry for the trick he played upon them during the feast? It will also be very interesting
to see just how livid Severus will be if/and when he is finally released to return to
Hogwarts...and just which one of Fudge, Dumbledore or Malfoy Sr., will be responsible for him getting released? Also if Crabbe, Goyle & Malfoy jr., will actually be charged &
what they be sentenced to or will there parents be able to get them free? Will the three
boys get there wands replaced & just what other magical school will take them after there
been expelled from Hogwarts? Can't wait to learn more about Harry's mentors (current & his
past ones) & about the war mage oath...and exactly what kind of training does a war
mage undertake & why there have been so few of them in such a long time?
| Griffin Raven chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Wow...Harry has certainly taken Hogwarts & its staff by storm by the incident upon the
Hogwarts express & then later in the Professor Dumbledore's office! I guess Severus didn't
expect Harry Potter to bite back quite so effectively after the actions of Malfoy, Crabbe
& Goyle then followed by his own attack upon Harry's mind...hmmm, could this not be called an attempted mind-rape? I do wonder just what Harry will do next?
More importantly how will the parents of the three students (Malfoy, Crabbe & Goyle) who
going to expselled & have there wands broken take the news? What will happen to Severus
will he pay the fine...and if he does return to Hogwarts then how can he teach Potions
to Harry if he's not allowed to be in the same room as him? But then again I guess that
Harry might have had significant training in potions as well? Hmm...wonder just what
house Harry will be sorted into? Also how will the rest of the student body take the
news of Malfoy, Crabbe & Goyle's explusion and how will the Slytherin's take this news?
| Poet Wroet chapter 29 . 1/14/2013
Something I was wondering about - earlier in the story you said the elves couldn't find Harry's room, yet they clean it and they could move his luggage. How is that?
| Poet Wroet chapter 6 . 1/12/2013
You might like the fic "Learning to Breathe", although that one is very different from this one. Harry is a soldier there, so when Dumbledore (who is labelled as a supervisor or however you call that in military) says "Jump", Harry asks "how high". He won't jump off the astronomy tower at someone's say-so, because he'd have to get clearance first. He'd do it if he had that. But Harry's superiors are all decent people and don't abuse the "privilege" of ordering Harry around.
| Theblackbook chapter 2 . 12/4/2012
Seriously I was laughing my arse off by his wit! Love him already!
| icecatfire chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
question what happens/happened to remus and sirius are they going to be in this story? i hope so they are my FAVORITE characters.
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/5/2012
Well, the story is really amazing. I sort of hoped that at least the first part ending would leave me satisfied as before I started reading I noticed it's not finished and probably is not going to be. I still loved it but I do really think it's worth finishing. You neither seem to want to do it, nor want to post that plan of yours you said you would if you were somehow unable to finish it in the first place. Still, props for the story, you're quite the writer in my opinion. : )
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
| zxskunkmuffinxz chapter 30 . 6/4/2012
This story is really good, and I'm sorry about the flamers/people who are almost forcing you to go to DLP.
| Debate4life chapter 26 . 5/17/2012
I enjoyed most of your story.
I do not enjoy your long diatribes about negative reviews, at least a few of which contain legitimate criticism. Also, targeting a single site is pretty juvenile- you're lumping a lot of stories together far more generally than the people you are upset with who lumped your story in with other stories featuring japanese elements. If you wish to write stories for accolades, you need to learn to accept criticism even for parts of your story you enjoy. Swords are controversial, for example. You do not need to take it personally- keep it in mind for writing future stories, whether you choose to disregard it or not, and accept the criticism with grace.
I seriously considered leaving no review for this story. I didn't much like the tone you took regarding other reviewers. I decided that the story did however deserve a review, even if I couldn't be entirely positive about it.
Moving on to the story itself, I most like the idea of other people raising Harry. I thought you handled that well, though there was something of an air of false mystery- that is, everyone but the readers knew something, such as who Harry's guardians are. I liked that you didn't make your Harry so superpowered he blew through all obstacles. I am interested in seeing where you go from here with Harry's response to the orb and his revelations about both himself and Hermione, but I probably will not leave another review.
Incidentally, I'm not into aerospace or electrical engineering, but I am going into my final year studying civil engineering. I'm familiar with the peer reviewed process for many journals (I've had my name on an article or two already), but I don't think someone has to have that level of expertise to offer a legitimate review for consideration of a story on a fiction-themed website targeted at teens.
| ToddGilliss chapter 30 . 5/12/2012
Any chance to moving forward on this story?
| Remzal Von Enili chapter 2 . 4/6/2012
I get the feeling that this is a harry who can and will fuck the magical worlds leaders over with a rusty pike.
| ironhair chapter 30 . 3/21/2012
Been more than 2.5 years... Hope u continue or atleast post the outline as u mentioned.