|Reviews for Echoes of Power, Part I: Anger|
| Nigh7 chapter 21 . 2/2/2007
Update soon! )
why there is so low number of reviews? this fic is realy good O.o
| Tama Saga chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Aww! Not SIYE exclusive anymore! Ah well, this is nice too. Now I get an e-mail update whenever a new chapter pops up.
| Nigh7 chapter 20 . 2/1/2007
I NEED MORE
Great fiction looking forward for the next chapters!
keep it up )
| Dragonstorm316 chapter 20 . 1/27/2007
I started following this over on SIYE, and I have had a fun time following this fic as it has developed. I am definately looking forward to future updates to this fic especially when the Weasley 3 go for retribution. This is also one of the more original fics I have read in the HP universe.
| lnky chapter 19 . 1/21/2007
I like how you described Martial Arts in this story. I myself have been doing them for a while.
In this chapter (19), you made a little cannon error; Prewitt instead of Prewett.
| lnky chapter 20 . 1/21/2007
The lack of reviews however puzzle me. Your writing is good. No particular spelling or grammatical mistake I noticed when reading. The plot is good. Harry isn't too overpowered. Enemies aren't too much stupid. It's a really good story.
However, I have no idea how much you have already written nor what is left in the story, but isn't the plot progressing a little too slowly? I mean, the story began roughly at the beginning of the Hogwarts school year and twenty chapters later it's still September. Maybe you have written a lot more and this story will be 500,0 words long in the end. I'll just have to wait and see.
| cashew chapter 4 . 1/17/2007
I just wanted to let you know that I adore sarcastic/powerful/refuse to be manipulated Harry...there are too few stories that contain Harry in this light and hardly any that are well-written. So thank you very much for writing a story that is both!
As I have much reading/homework that I have been putting off I must (unfortunately) stop at this chapter...but I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying the story. Excellent work!
| The Librarian's Assistant chapter 20 . 1/17/2007
amazing! keep it up!
| Princess Star Neko chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
I LOVE THIS STORY ALREADY! *laughs maniacally* It's Harry's first day ever at Hogwarts in his fifth year, and already he's gotten rid of Snape, Malfoy Crabbe and Goyle. I can't wait to see what happens next.
I have a question though. How can BOTH Ron and Ginny be in their fifth year, if Ginny was born in mid-August, and Ron in September? The only way they'd be in the same year was if they were both BORN in the same year, instead of a half a month apart from each other...
| AchillesMonkey chapter 11 . 1/16/2007
Your story is very well written and I'm having a bit of trouble making myself stop reading it to go to bed. But now I'm finally managing to make myself, so I will read more tomorrow. I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this and I really don't know why it only has 13 reviews.
| vt chapter 19 . 1/9/2007
I really like this story... I have you in my fav's at SIYE but I haven't been able to get into the site since 12/19. I wrote them and they are still working on the problem. So now your in my story alert list here.
| SDSuperCharger chapter 19 . 1/5/2007
I am loving the story so far. I am interested to see where you go with the Magical Theories and the War Mages. I am curious if you started this stoy on another site or had to repost it for some reason because you indicated that the updates would be about bi-monthly but 19 chapters have been posted in 2 days. I particularly enjoy the chapters with some of the back story filled in and would love to see at least a small flashback in every chapter. I doubt you would admit to it but I have an idea that the 4th prophecy was refering to HP rather than LV perhaps you could drop a hint or two into future chapters. Sorry but since I am enjoying it so much there is very little room for constructive criticism. Please keep up the great work.
| fancyspinner chapter 14 . 1/5/2007
Ah I must say this gets better and better. I love the multidimentional characters and I'll be looking forward to see what yu'll do with Snape. I must say your story has kept me rather busy all week and I've been torn between drawing it out or reading nonstop - as its Friday I'll probably finish it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing such a realistic alternite verse that could have easily been.
| Fancyspinner chapter 12 . 1/4/2007
great chapters. Loved the family bit and am enjoying all the suspense.
| Farfumsane chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
I have to admit that this is one of the most gratifying first chapters I have read in a long time. The feeling of satisfaction that I feel at the moment for the way Harry handled everything has me grinning rather widely. If the rest of your story is as interesting I am thouroughly looking forward to it.
Just so you know, I don't review often, but I had to pause in my readin (something that I do even less frequently) to congratulate you on a chapter well written.