|Reviews for New Perspective Evangelion|
| xArtemisXxx chapter 7 . 10/5
why does every oc for this fanfiction have to be such a coward at all times. And the fact that everytime something major happens you have her act all scared and shit.
| swordking1325 chapter 7 . 7/14
Dang, MC is submissive. I knew it in earlier chapters when they relented to let others dictate what clothes they wear but here it really shows. She doesn't care that Shinji could have seen her naked initially and then Asuka blows up at her and gaslights Noriko, and MC just accepts it's all her own fault...somehow. Her Japanese mind (Noriko's) definitely set in more than she thought.
| Elayda chapter 11 . 6/27
In that last bit of self-reflection, it reminded me of an analysis done by gargulec on SV of “aesthetics” by contrapoints. I think the part that applies here is that a position that was taken is that an action is feminine because the person who performs it is a women. Not because society says so. This was in critique of the position that womanhood is performative that it is something that society can take away from you if you don’t meet their expectations.
I don’t know. I just kinda felt like that last section tapped into this same wibbly-wobbly idea space.
| Elayda chapter 10 . 6/27
Ah, yes, Nerv. I’d like to report a data leak at the local high school. Somehow people figured out the AT fields.
I can barely imagine how awkwardly this would have turned out if Nagato had called it in.
| Elayda chapter 9 . 6/27
Is the eSOS brigade like some sort of mental wakeup call that this is all a mental break the SI has had? It seems unlikely, but in the context of a girl lashing around for anchors after a tragic event. It’s oddly poignant and sad.
| Elayda chapter 1 . 6/27
It feels like there was a translation error in there.
| Agastopia chapter 5 . 11/1/2020
This dude predicting the 2020 Olympic Games
| anon chapter 14 . 6/10/2020
The plot has become slightly incoherent in the later chapters. Maybe rewrite it? Also, please don't do that skipping back and forth in time thing, it doesn't add anything and takes away from readability.
Also, whatever happened to "Haruhi" and her club? Why hasn't Noriko just told Kensuke that she doesn't have a clue how he could become a pilot, or maybe even asked around NERV? Otherwise, the story so far is good, just minus the immersion-killingly funny Irish slang. Though to be fair, the phonetic Japanese accent is every bit as hilarious but since it sounds 'strayan it's in a good way.
NORIKO WAKAMOTO: Have you even kissed Rei yet? I thought not. So then, your first kiss wasn't Rei! It was me, Noriko!
(I know referencing Jojo is normally a twitternigger thing but fuck it, it was funny. )
| anon chapter 10 . 6/9/2020
This story is grade A good shit, except for the parts where it uses irish slang and makes me laugh too hard to take it seriously.
Also, the phonetic accent makes her sound 'strayan, which is absolutely hilarious.
| anon chapter 9 . 6/9/2020
Noriko, you came.
Jokes on you, "I came" (sexual) in Japanese is "I went."
| anon chapter 1 . 6/9/2020
BEGORRAH, 'TIS LIKE ANUDDA POTATO FAMINE
| kostigan chapter 14 . 10/14/2019
Not bad, I really wish you kept writting this. At first, I thought Noriko wasn't actually changing things significantly or even interacting enough with the rest of the cast but all that changed after she started to accept herself. I think this was going in an interesting direction, all in all, and it would be neat if one day we get a closure.
Btw I'm also a big fan of your Worm SI story which is the best SI in the fandom by far and I hope at least that one is still alive.
| Burned Cookie chapter 14 . 8/29/2019
Wow this story was incredible.
I really loved the psycho-horror and how the MC slowly came to terms with the situation.
| Burned Cookie chapter 2 . 8/27/2019
I just realised that about 70% of women in anime are insensitive assholes. The rest is meek and quiet.
Whats up with that?
| Blitzstrahl chapter 13 . 6/7/2019
Continuing my chapter 14 comment.
What's with Misato? Her whole "could you please, be a 'cum dump' for Shinji, because that'd be great for him" has me going wtf?