|Reviews for New Perspective Evangelion|
| anon chapter 9 . 6/9/2020
Noriko, you came.
Jokes on you, "I came" (sexual) in Japanese is "I went."
| anon chapter 1 . 6/9/2020
BEGORRAH, 'TIS LIKE ANUDDA POTATO FAMINE
| kostigan chapter 14 . 10/14/2019
Not bad, I really wish you kept writting this. At first, I thought Noriko wasn't actually changing things significantly or even interacting enough with the rest of the cast but all that changed after she started to accept herself. I think this was going in an interesting direction, all in all, and it would be neat if one day we get a closure.
Btw I'm also a big fan of your Worm SI story which is the best SI in the fandom by far and I hope at least that one is still alive.
| Burned Cookie chapter 14 . 8/29/2019
Wow this story was incredible.
I really loved the psycho-horror and how the MC slowly came to terms with the situation.
| Burned Cookie chapter 2 . 8/27/2019
I just realised that about 70% of women in anime are insensitive assholes. The rest is meek and quiet.
Whats up with that?
| Blitzstrahl chapter 13 . 6/7/2019
Continuing my chapter 14 comment.
What's with Misato? Her whole "could you please, be a 'cum dump' for Shinji, because that'd be great for him" has me going wtf?
| Blitzstrahl chapter 14 . 6/7/2019
Originally I read this 10 years ago.
Suddenly I remembered the scene where Misato was teaching Noriko how to use a tampon. While idly browsing NGE fics. I thought it was a femShinji fic.
So a Google search for female Shinji lead me to this, and it wasn't even till the tampon scene did I even realize, this was the very fic i was looking for lol.
| Blitzstrahl chapter 10 . 6/5/2019
Now that I reread it. Noriko didn't lose the 2nd round.
Asuka sent unit 02 into some sort of dropkick or heeldrop maneuver, Noriko shots "destroyed" 02s feet.
The hatch protecting the entry plug cant be breached with a single knife strike, so... how'd Asuka win?
| Blitzstrahl chapter 2 . 6/4/2019
Wierd that they introduce themselves with a plural.
2nd Child, not 2nd Children.
| Blitzstrahl chapter 1 . 6/4/2019
Shouldn't "she" have asked what a EVA even is first?
| Ruberforumfree chapter 1 . 3/23/2019
Of, course... one of the few and rare Self Insert fanfiction of Evangelion HAS to -fucking-be a Gender Bender one... god is dead
| Aelain chapter 14 . 1/30/2019
Well this was excellent, wish it had kept updating. Very good characterization specially with the gender change that isnt normally well done in fanfiction.
| Arkio chapter 14 . 1/14/2019
This fic is pretty amazing.
Realistic characterization, interesting scenes and logical divergence from cannon that is done beautifully is quite rare to find these days.
Although, I have to say that I am a bit dismayed at seeing when the last update happened. But you did have several months, even years between uptades so I'll keep hoping.
| tatalalo chapter 7 . 11/7/2018
So Ive been reading for awhile now and I can't help but notice that the MC seems to have gender related issues, but not any tangible sense of gender dysphoria beyond the occasional aversion to "oh yes, a reminder to my current gender." Now, that may or may not be because the author wants to express a usually taboo concept in a safe, fantasy setting, or because this was written ten years ago.
Either or, I'd go as far to say that as far as the MC is concerned, is really rather well-adjusted, all things considered. Not that the inprompt sex change really should matter much since this isn't like one coming out to family members about being transgendered, so much as it's introducing yourself to strangers in a (previously) fantasy setting. The fact that there is an alibi in this sense gives something of a barrier to anything that might otherwise be unhandleable in a real world setting. Something that should really work to the MC's advantage. There is no issue with the MC revealing their original life, except that the only proof is by word alone, so really, all of the issues are internal.
So what are these internal issues?
Well, i think the MC seems to have a subtle gender double-standard, especially when it comes to the misplaced idea of 'gender-loyalty.' Also, a total lack of awareness of sexual attraction and what happens when exposing one's self to the opposite sex, something he really should know already by now, once being a man and supposedly having a girlfriend. Unless he assumed that being body-displaced, a fact which nobody else knows, somehow makes him an exception to the rule. I can't think up many reasons why he would act the way he does if not because he still sees himself as a man, and due to the subconscious double-standard, sees his actions as totally natural responses of a male perspective in this situation, so he should only act as if every little feminine thing matters, even when it really shouldn't.
Although, maybe that was just the period talking. I usually don't like when gender-bender stories use this trope, since most of those stories abuse it for the sake of a gimmick. Menstruation is different for each woman, and the extreme version that is common in general fiction is rare irl. In this case, you wrote it in a way where it blends with the tone of the story well enough.
Clothing choices between men and women is huge though, like entering entirely new cultures of fashion(and alt-world Japanese fashion at that), so any sort of reaction makes sense.
| Matthew Badger chapter 11 . 6/15/2017
The sad thing is, the SI really has had what he feared come true - His original personality is gone. Sure he has similar likes now, maintains little quirks and acts less feminine occasionally, but the true core of his personality has vanished.
He's completely lost what made him who he was and even worse, he can no longer understand or recognise why that's a bad thing. Truly a nightmare scenario, handled beautifully by the author.
Nice to see gender-bending played straight for once. :)