Reviews for A Mermaid's Tears
WolfLover57 chapter 13 . 2/4/2017
Thank you for writing this, it made my day!
FreakyFanGirl136 chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
Huh, I like the details you made through the ending about the both of them. I've got to admit, you totally nailed Neji I think, and made him way more... I think the right word is "abusive" and "conflicted " toward Hinata. I can take a pretty good guess about who this HE was. Naruto, of course. All over all, I like your first chapter so far, well done with the Hyuuga cousin's personalities. I can tell the rest of these chapters are going to be pretty interesting too. :)
sundes2013 chapter 9 . 9/25/2014
Hahaha aww this is cute!
372259 chapter 6 . 10/29/2013
This one shots are so tear-jerking and so powerful, I love them! I especially liked this one and the one where Sasuke likes Hinata :) You should write more SasukexHinata fics if you have time! You writing is amazing and I know you'd write the couple beautifully :)
aurora0914 chapter 13 . 7/5/2013
out of curiosity, how is this sasuhina? it's nice and all, though
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 13 . 2/12/2012
Psycho is back!

Too short for me. I need the other shot.

Question is: Are we getting another shot? You've been gone too long already.

Just so you know, I'll be on the waiting line :)
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 12 . 2/12/2012
Oh, no! Sasuke, that's worth seven years of bad luck.


What was Hinata asking for?

Come on Hinata, surprise the world! It's not like she's weak, a life like the one she had cannot be lived by someone weak :/

Hit. Punch. Scratch. Slap. Whatever. Just do something, you can cry a river after that or before or in the middle. Just accomplish it. Hinata can be her own hero .
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 11 . 2/12/2012
I like it. Short but accurate.

They never understand what it takes to endure something until they're in that place. It is never as easy as it seems. It is always a different point of view and stance.
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 10 . 2/11/2012
God, poor boy... I love NaruHina, but KakaHina has something that thrills me more.

And that's an answer to my previous review as well :)

By the way, that last sentence of the story made me shiver. Such a sadness and resignation gets me :0

But I'm happy Hinata and Kakashi had a good ending! haha :D
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 9 . 2/11/2012
I love this!

It's so nicely written :D

KakaHina is my favorite pairing after all. And there's not much fandom about them out there u.u

So far, this chapter's been my favorite.

And I liked the smile play :)

What's the reason of Naruto's disappointment? Don't tell me he wanted a confession? xD

Thanks a lot for writing this delightful story
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 8 . 2/11/2012
Nice plot :)

Haku and Hinata... that's an unusual pairing, but not complains here ;)
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 7 . 2/10/2012
This one was really enjoyable!

A chakra cake! That's brilliant :O

Really cute story :)
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 6 . 2/10/2012
I don't find it depressing at all.

I don't even feel pity for Hiashi.

I think, this is just as life is: bittersweet.
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 5 . 2/10/2012
Hahaha, this is indeed light! It's easy to enjoy :)

It's really troublesome if the girl is allergic to dogs, poor thing. The fact that she kept quiet makes it cute
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 4 . 2/10/2012
Is it just me or this chapter gives off a more mature feeling? I think it does. Well, nicely done :)
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