Reviews for Loyalty
David Fishwick chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Good story and your characaters of Darla and the Immortal are spot on. So thanks for writing.
Phoenix.G.Fawkes chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Wonderful piece. It's so... so Darla, her thoughts, her actions, her words. It's a perfect characterization. The fic is also very fluid and I liked your portrayal of the Immortal. We never get too see what he's really like, but I imagine him just like you described him. I liked the last line, I could very well imagine Darla saying that in that precise tone. All in all, I enjoyed reading this very much (I love to read about Darla and the Fanged Four past, especially if it involves Holtz too).
Too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Really liked. Your characterization is really good. Spot on. Well, for Darla anyway. We never saw the Immortal, but your Immortal is really believable.