Reviews for Longing
yourfriendlyneighborhoodturtle chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I really liked your story. It was really good.
faefay chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Interesting. I like the line about him bleeding so that she wouldn't. Very angsty :).
thee-dark-enchantress chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
oh my,this was really really really exicuted,wonderfly written(sorry,can't spell,hee hee!) and a joy to really did like done!


incarnated-soul chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
Oh wow, really wow. The writing was exceptional, very beautiful and poignant. I loved the part about the windows. The beginning and the end, I would say where the best parts. Oh Hannah and Thierry, it makes me ache to think of them like that. I wouldn't necessarily have put Hannah in some of those characters or questioned Thierry's self control ;), but it was realy beautiful. I loved it. Really brilliant writing.
Anterrabae chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Ooh, very nice. This is very well written.. you can feel the emotions in the words. I love that last part about him bleeding so that she won't. So tortured, this couple. :) But great job.