|Reviews for The Matrix Return|
| Kyle chapter 1 . 2/22
YOUR SPELLING IS SHIT.
If I were to grade this, it would receive an F-.
| Kalen chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Story was 10/10 would bang
| benignmilitancy chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Oh my God. I am busting my gut laughing over here.
Genius. Absolute genius.
| X chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
| The Truth chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Story really sucks
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Uhh… I know a lot of people said this, but you really need to check your grammar. It's like reading some kind of code or new language.
| LunaQuetzal chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Your fics are so bad...I hope you know the reviews are just trolling you, right? you must be what, two years old to be writing like this?
It ranges into so bad it's good territory really...you're the joke of FF. I just don't whether you're doing it on purpose or...or you really speak like that. shudders
| CaptainChaos chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Really? Unless you're about 6 years old you have scant excuse for murdering the English language! A simple read through of your work would have at least allowed you to have misspelled words the same way which were repeated throughout. For example: Morpheus, Morphus, Merpheus, Morpus and Morpeud all within 27 lines of text, and this is a main character!
I don't wish to stamp on your creativity, as you are plainly an enthusiast of the Sci Fi genre, but it is highly distracting when the mere basics of grammar and spelling negate the readability of the piece.
| Morley chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
Seriously? Are you 10?
| fatty mcfattson chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
| 5th Dimension chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Apparently your trollfics are so brilliant that tvtropes is quoting you.
I see the rumors were true...
| Windy downhill chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
| Shadesaurus chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
There are so many grammar failures in this I won't even stop to correct you.
| Celeste chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Ummm... I think there is a spelling error in there somewhere...
| anonymous chapter 1 . 12/19/2011