i like it! i hate all that the hunter! is sammy gonna die? dean gonna do something right? i hope u update new chapter soon! ciao!

OH my gosh girl - that was so intense...I stayed u pto read it eventhough I was heading to bed...you HAVE to update again soon - you really do - because that was just too intense!

Please!

Wow! I'm not sure I can think of anything else to say, but...Wow! I've just read all three chapters and my mind is spinning...the cruelty of those guys...and the complete stupidity is just beyond my ability to get my mind around it.

Your description was absolutely excellent and I absolutely bow to your genious. This is fantastic and I wait with baited breath for the next update!

I just hope you get rid of Jo and Ellen. I have no use for either of them. Sorry about that.

OMG OMG OMG you killed me dead OMG OMG OMG Im in shock please update ASAP

Wow, I didn't think you could top yourself from part I with the cruelty of Jake and company...but the opening few paragraphs...a whole new level! And thanks for updating so quickly!

AW you said it was just for me? OH fangirl squeel! Bet you say that to all your readers huh? *winks*

Girl, i so have to tell you that this is just to good to be posted just here. Please tell me you have this at other sites too? (PM me if you havent)

I love the way you write, i really do!

I only just got the reply so i am not sure if something is up with the email alerts, but i see chapter 3 is up also. I am off to work now, so i cant read it. Damn!

Loving this hon, and will be back for more soon!

Umm...That was tortuous for me as the reader who likes those Winchesters, and obviously for the Winchesters. Jake and his happy band of miscreants are so uninformed were ol' yellow eyes is concerned. I mean, I don't know what the demon has in mind or why it's so interested in Sam Winchester, but killing all the "children" just doesn't seem like the way to go about things. I'm just waiting for the happy band of micreants to revolt against their exalted leader. They obviously didn't sign up for what Jake is dishing out to Sam, and the sure as hell are probably tired of his tired ass telling them what to do. This just brings up the point that just because these people have been touched in some way by the demon or have piqued the interest of the demon in some way, doesn't mean they are ALL bad. Same thing with the vampires, and just people, societies or whatever in general. Hell, I'm all angry and riled up on Sam's behalf, and poor Dean getting mistreated and having to watch his brother slipping away...This story is excellent and is keeping me on my toes! I just don't know what to think. I'm hoping for a few different things, but I can't wait to see what happens next.

OMG that was so freakin awesome. It was great... absolutly loved it. and no itwasn't too long.. it was GREAT...

update soon please.. I need to know what happens...LOVED IT...

wow poor Sam. I really like this story.

No! You can't kill Sammy! Please tell me Dean gets free. Please? LOL. LOVE this story. Very well written and enough angst to keep me grinning for a while.

This is excellent! Poor Sammy...he's going to live...right? Please let him be okay soon. Dean will save the day! Right! Or maybe that Joseph guy? Or he'll at least help. Oh, heck, what do I know? Not much..

Please, update soon! I need to know..! I can't wait for the next chapter.

-Ariel.

Hey Sweety

okay this is review no 2 just in case the first one didn't go through like I figured, anyway first up, happy new year sweets I hope it is a supernaturally fantastic one

next wow what a story, just got one little question, when are you planning on updating? Soon I hope

hugs shelly

Oh my God! I'm shaking. This is the most frightening story I've ever read. I can see it all happening. Half-way through I had to stop reading because my heart was pounding so loud. My hands are shaking even as I'm writing this. You are an incredible writer! If any of your stuff ever makes it to the shelves, I'm totally reading it! I can't believe those creeps! Killing a baby! Rosie! I loved the episode she was in; Salvation! How could anyone do that? I'm not even sure if I can stand another chapter like this. It's so good! And yet the thought of this happening. What'll happen to Andy? I hope he tells Gordan Walker to shove a knife where the sun don't shine! That guy was a freak! I can't believe these guys are calling Sam a Demon helper! For all they know the psychics may be the only people that can protect them. Please don't kill Sammy! Hoping you'll update soon,

King

M dont know what to say! this fic is spechless i in shock! really like it! great job i love the way that you write and i cant wait to see the next chapter! poor samm how the hell they going to get out of this one? really great fic! i really enjoy!

til' the next chapter ! i will looking forward it!

anfitrite.

Oh my god. This had to be one of the most painful chapters I've ever read in fanfic, where someone didn't die (yet). You just put these boys through HELL, you realize that don't you? Despite all the physical injuries, the hardest part for me to read was when Jake announced that they killed Rosie. I was ready to jump through some portal to the SPN AU and kick these guy's asses myself! I can't believe they killed a baby! And Sam and Dean's reactions... oh god I feel like crawling into a ball and staying there for a week.

This is massively painful. You are putting these boys (OUR boys) through the mill in ways I would never be able to manage. And despite it all, I want MORE. Because they CANNOT, after all the evil they've done, kill Sam. Which would be killing Dean. You cannot let that happen! Someone has to save the day here! I just don't know who it can be...

Please update soon! I'm dying here, waiting to find out what's going to happen...

p.s. Great work! ;D