your descriptions are amazing!

havent finished reading but i just got up to where hes asking sam what powers did he posses.i think it might have made more sence if he had asked sam where the others were, since he probabley should know that sams had inconters with other pycicks(cant spell that word lol)and also on an almost unrelated matter this line...

"Jake’s fisted knuckles whitened as he reapplied his unyielding grasp on the helpless Winchester’s hair"

...is exactilly why sam needs a hair cut good so farD

Oh my ...! I can't believe what is happening! I love Sam angst and this is above and beyond! And poor Dean, so helpless!

As sick as this might sound, I can't wait for more!

Loved to see the brothers get THEIR asses kicked once in a and long chapter too.I like long job man

OH MY GOSH! That was amazing...you have to update som emore though - what do these guys want and what the heck are they gonna do to Sam and Dean to try and get it? Oh man! Update soon, please?

LOVED IT!totaly saw it coming but still LOVED IT!I liked how sam was so (i dont want to say dim...)innocent to the obvious and how dean knew off the bat somthing was wrong.

Wow! What a great connection of all the 'chosen' to Sam. I had forgotten about Rosie's ability. How cool! I LOVE when the author does a little research and makes us think! Your torture scenes are SO gruesome and realistic. Yikes! I read with one eye closed. :D

What I thought what was most interesting was that Jo gave up Sam's abilities and it was just glanced over. No one paid her any mind after she spoke - including Dean. Seeing that Dean was afraid that Jo and Ellen would give them up (and it seems they did, whether they meant to or not) his lack of response is interesting. Although, he's a little preoccupied with his injuries and Sam's impending demise.

Fascinating read. I can't wait for your next chapter!

:D

Caroline

Oh God, my Sammy. Please, you wouldn't kill him without warning us first would you? You've got me in total suspense here, please keep going!

OMG, OMG, OMG! You've done it again! I'm like shaking as I write this review! OMG! This is so great! I LOVE the desperation that Dean's feeling as he can do nothing for Sam. And Sam revealing stuff to protect Dean... But when you had Jake shoot Sam in the thigh and the chest... WOW! OMG I...wow. It's just... wow. I seriously, seriously cannot wait until the next chapter and please don't leave us with a cliffhanger like that for very long. You're doing such a great job and I LOVE this story. Wow.

Anxiously waiting,

Stacee Phelps

omg

wow

this was GREAT

please update soon.

D

That was a really well done chapter. You kept us in suspense and managed to leave us hanging. Again.

I really like your writing style. "The blood still dripping from his temple and now being pulled by gravity, dropped silently to the hardwood floor below. His heart fell right along with it." What a wonderful way with words you have.

I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the great story!

Geez... those boys can't catch a break... really I'm looking forward to dean killing all of them... where is Dr. Badass btw? Please update quickly

YOU are so cruel!

PLease tell me this isn't a death fic! The things being done to Sammy are awful. You are tearing my heart out-your details are just too vivid! Please post again very soon!

OMG UR STORY IS AWESOME I WISH THEY WOULD DO THAT ON THE SHOW LOL KEEP IT UP JUST DON'T KILL SAMMY LMAO DEAN HAS GOT TO GET FREE, OK NOW I HAVE TO LIGHT ANOTHER CIGGY AFTER READING THIS LMAO