This is really a great story. I was so happy to see a new chapter this morning. Great job!

That was brutal.

Wow.

Really, truly brutal. Graphic and compelling and just painful. The reader is tortured right along with Sam and Dean.

I'm a little speechless to tell you the truth. This was so real-just wow.

I would say more but you've so floored me with this that I can't. I just NEED to know what happens next. Now.

That is one of the best fanfics I have read thus far. It is well written, full of intrigue and angst ... it kept me on the edge of my seat!

Awk! I really hope this isn't going to be a deathfic cause I hate deathfics but I can't see any way out unless one of the baddies has a change of heart. And even then, Sam is pretty near dead from loss of blood.

Wow - that is pretty much all I can say. And I am waiting anxiously but with some trepidation for the next chapter cause I just can't think how they can get out of this. If John was alive or something... but wah! My poor Sammy!

Phx

Oh man! I'm crying here. That was - (trying to breathe) - awesome. But, my god - poor boys. HOW are they going to get out of this? :). My heart is breaking - along with Dean's. Sam needs fixing and then lots and lots of cuddles!

This story just keeps better and better. It has my two favourite Supernatural fanfiction ingredients - Sammy Angst and Dean fealing helpless. Keep up the good work and update

soon. :-)

Wow...it's 4 in the morning and I'm still coherent! Amazing...what else is amazing? This chapter! No doubt about it! The length was perfect. I agree, if you did break it up, it would have been torture. Hehehe see what I did there? Okay...so I'm coherent but not all there. Anyway, GREAT JOB! BREAK FREE, DEAN! BREAK FREE AND SAVE SAMMY! AH! Update soon! :D

Please, you can't just cruelly leave me hanging here. This is great. Can't wait!

Such intensity! What does Jake want with Sam and Dean? Why is he going to great lengths, even to let his people die, to get to them? I can't wait until your next chapter!

:D

Caroline

Am really loving this! Poor Sam , trying to reach for his big brother

More please! (am liking tied up and beaten Dean :o) )

X

Rachel, awesome opening chapters - this has to one the most exciting 2 chapters that I've had the pleasure to read ever! Poor Sam all limpified (Yay), almost suffocated, bloodied and battered,about to suffer a little chat with head-bad hunter Jake really does need his big brother right about now. Dean kicked butt in defence of his brother (wonderful visual fight scenes)but the odds are most firmly stacked against him coming to his brother's aid anytime soon! I even liked Ellen in this story (so far) and her reactions were just so real, true fear for her daughter and anguish for the boys. So now you have me hooked please update soon. Please! Roz.

P.s. I just with the damn alerts had been working so that I could have found this story sooner!

I really like this story...very involving...our poor boys are getting a bit battered and bruised though, aren't they?

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Good job so far! :)

Really great story so far. Love it. Can't wait for more...really...post soon please?

awesome start to what I'm sure will be another great story.. update soon...

Ooh an 'inqusition' - chills - somehow I get a feeling that that won't be too good for Sam. And poor Dean being forced to watch. AWK! How are they going to get out of this one?

Sorry I could't review last night but we had a major power outage and only got things back on a few minutes ago.

I am loving this so far, though I have to give you kudos for being able to coordinate so many characters in such tight quarters.

Another action filled chapter, but now Dean is just as beat up as Sam so I'm anxious for the next chapter to see how this is going to go!

Great job!