Well hello miss! Sorry it took so long for me to begin reading this! My sister got married so it has been a long couple weeks, haha. Now to the review. This first chapter was great. Action packed. I love it! Poor Sammy. I'll be reading this all day lol. I'll be at work so let's hope I don't get any sad chapters while I'm there! iPhones really are gonna be the death of me haha cuz I read stories in the craziest of places. :) Onto the 2nd chapter! )

Much love!

Overdrive 3

Honey, I can't thank you enough for this masterpiece, I really take my sweet time to read it and appreciate the construction, the characters, the suspence, everything. Thanks I will never forget your story, it is trully one shiny brick of the pavement to the "Epic love story of sam and Dean".

Kiss,

Lika.

You are the queen of whomping Sam. Seriously, how many times did the kid get shot, and whipped, and drowned, and drugged.

This started out with a bang, that entire bar scene was so intense and dramatic and well-written.

Excellent.

Awesome story.

Okay what's up with the weird kid at the mini mart? What does Dean know that he's not sharing with Sammy? Bless Sammy's heart for getting chips from a mini mart. He's just awesome. Not the brightest bulb sometimes but awesome. Awesome Job! Very intense...

I really don't care for Joshua. I think he's an ass. I'm sure he's an awesome hunter and all of that but the guy needs a personality transplant. I really hate him saying mean things about Sammy. Dean's totally right. In Sam's limited years of living he's more of a man then Joshua could ever be. Okay I'm off my soapbox. LOL! Anyway I'm really worried that there's another creepy hunter after poor Sammy. The good part is Sammy has Bobby who's freakin AWESOME and Dean who's like the best big brother in the world but then again Sammy's the best little brother in the world so it balances out.

I just have this horrible feeling everything's not safe yet. I don't know why but I do. Again I'm just glad the boys have Bobby. The man rocks!

OMG that poor baby! SHEESE Sammy is really having a bad time. I mean the poor baby is already hurt severely and now he's shot? I'm just glad that Bobby is with them. I've always adored Bobby. You always have known Bobby loves those boys and those boys love Bobby. Anyway I hope Dean finds that sadistic sharp shooter and either kills him or tortures him and then he kills him slowly. Excellent job! Extremely exciting!

OMG those poor babies! I wish you could bring Jake back just so you could torture and then kill him. I really think he needed torture. Lots of it. I mean he thought it was such a hoot torturing poor Sammy ): Then Jo said something so incredibly stupid. After everything she saw poor Sammy go through she made that stupid ass comment. No wonder I hated that chick. Anyway incredible chapter!

OMG! Poor Sammy ): I'm totally blaming this on that crazy ass piece of crap Gordon! I wish somebody like Bobby was there. He would make doggy kibble out of these clowns. Poor Sammy ): Poor Dean ):

I seriously hope that when Dean gets out of this he beats the living hell out of Jake. I REALLY loath him. I want him tortured and then shot like 5x in the head. I mean the guy is a freakin sadist. He hasn't even said what his problem is with Sammy. Instead he tortures him and he's not even really awake. I'm positive Dean will make them pay for hurting his little brother. I feel so sorry for both Winchesters. Maybe Ellen can something. Maybe these guys will just assume that since Ellen is a woman she's just weak. We all knew Ellen was many things. Weak not being one of them. EXCELLENT!

I really think Dean should have gone with his original instinct. I know it's always tempting to listen to Sammy but he really should have been listening to the little voice in his own head. Dean REALLY should have listened to Ellen's clue. BTW I LOVE Ellen! Can't stand Jo but love Ellen. In fact my only complaint about this story is Jo. However it's worth having the ever annoying Jo cause this is very well done!

I just read this in one go. It took me practicall all afternoon, but I had to finish. You balanced the whump, angst, and humor wonderfully.

Awesome ending, what a great story! I love that there were some breakthroughs in their relationship. Dean is so exceptional at keeping people out, to see him open up for Sam and to promise to try to keep doing so was refreshing. Something I've hoped for on the show since day one. The scene in the cemetery was beautiful too, Dean admitting Sam makes his life better, all but confessing Sam is his reason for living. Really lovely. Thank you for sharing!

LD

I love that Dean is so protective of Sam, always there for him, but sometimes...sometimes I really just wish he'd take care of himself with half the attention he pays to his brother or, really, ANYONE who needs help. I know Sam's taken the worst of it here, but frankly not by much. Dean's just as hurt, he just refuses to acknowledge it and it always kills me that he doesn't think he deserves the same compassion and care as everyone around him. I just want to shake him and cuddle him and make him see he's just as important. *sigh*

LD