Reviews for Ambush
QSMkitten chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Ooh I like, great first chapter looking forward to seeing how this turns out.
carocali chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
So nice to see another story from you! Too bad the stupid alerts are down, yet again!

I love where you are taking this idea. I don't think that Ellen would willingly do anything to hurt the boys, and the way you described the tension in the room was fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter!


Samjacklover aka Sammy chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Great one again Rachelly!
Starliteyes17 chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Woah! What a cool concept, Rachelly. Love this idea of the boys getting sidelined by so many hunters at once. Is Gordon going to make an appearance eventually?

Thought it was a cool twist with Ellen calling Dean, "Sam". I take it she didn't want to alert the hunters holding her captive that Dean was also with Sam? At first I thought she was in on it, but I love how you turned it around so that Ellen and Jo are on the boy's side instead. Awesome work, I could totally see all the action taking place as it unfolded.

Ah! Cliffhanger! No! ;D Can't wait to see where you take us with this.
stjra chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Excellent start, can't wait to see where you take us! I'll keep a look out for this one, especially seeings the alerts are down! Thanks for sharing!
LynyrdSkynyrdRoadie chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
You've snagged my attention. Please update this soon.
Ash8 chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Love it. Can't wait for more!
nolongeractivedfgdfgd chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Oh, I really like it so far. Keep going!
bally2cute chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Whew, that was intense! I'm itching for more!
Phx chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Wow. Fast paced beginning. I did laugh though when I read that there were exactly 11 hunters after them. It just struck me funny. I was like 'that's an odd number'!

I love how Dean is so subtly protective in the beginning but then comes out in full force once the threat is realized. I am not a big Ellen and Jo fan so I was actualling yelling at Dean to just get Sam out of there and not to be worried about them - though I knew he couldn't. LOL!

Excellent start. Now if only the alerts would come back up, huh?
InSecret chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
So I'm a little worried about the boys... Interested to see where you're taking this. Keep on!
Dolen Feredir chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Uh oh! Things aren't looking good for the boys! That was very well done and I'm really looking forward to the next part.
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