oh my god sammy brain dead i cant believe it my heart dropped i finally got a chance to read more now i gotta keep going cant stop here if you get the chance, i would be grateful if you could read one of my sisters stories and tell me what you think they arent very long and i believe you are a great writer so your input would be very helpful my sister stories are under sammygirl1963 i would also like to know how many other stories you have thank you so much julie

Who doesn't love limp!Sam and protective!Dean?

oh my. what can i say. my heart is totally breaking for Dean right now. i cant stand the thought of Sammy dying either.i found myself saying thank god the ambulance has job really great job THANK YOU!

you really know how to dish out the pain. i love it.

hey just finished your second chapter. it was great. i cant wait to see how the boys get out of this one. i can see everything as it happens,and thats what i like most about your story. you give great details. ive never been much for reading but when my sister (sammygirl 1963) started writing i just had to read those stories. your story is the only other story on here that i have looked at and im glad i did you got a winner

i just started reading your story. you really have a way with words. im hooked already. and im not much of a reader.

Dude, this story is like a dream fanfiction to me hehe. It's dead brilliant. You write amazingly well and you manage to keep the characters in character. Expecially Dean. You don't overdo his reactions so the end results is beyond explainable by words lol. Am I deep or what? Haha, nah just joking.

Anyway this story has like everthing I love about Supernatural and in general. The brotherly love, limp!Sam, protective!dean, lovely Bobby, action, angst, humor and just... I'm amazed!

I am SO grateful that a friend of mine on LJ linked it to me! It's hellofalong story, but you managed to have me desperate for more for every chapter! Now that's what I call well written!

And funny thing is that I can picture this like some kind of Supernatural movie because you describe things so well too. I got no problems picturing the scenes in my head. And you just make me love the boys even more... if possible O_o

GAH! You rock!lol

liked this story had problems with old account. was goldenshadows

RACHELLY!

I've just finished this incredible story.

I absolutely LOVED that Sam jumped into the bay to save Bracken, even after all the pain Bracken had inflicted upon him. I would expect nothing less of Sam.

I was also very impressed with Joshua-coming around to recognizing Sam's specific strengths instead of viewing them as weaknesses. I so hoped Joshua would 'see the light', so to speak, in your story, and was very glad to see that he did. I quite like Joshua.

You write the brother's relationship beautifully. The "serious" part of the relationship and the "banter/humor" are both very accurate-you balanced both extremely well in your story.

Thank you for a magnificent read and for replying to all of my reviews. It was a bit surprising to me that you were so personable and respondant and I was so pleased to get to interract with you throughout the time I was reading.

Have a good one and once again, wonderfully done.

~ Salty Q

My you do know how to spin a tale, Rachelly. I just wanted to drop a line and let you know I'm still reading, although not at the break-neck pace I was before due to a chaotic work schedule the last few days. Lately my favorite parts have been Joshua's visit, Sam's small victory in sending Dean flying across the room, and the fidgety Mini Mart clerk. Again, well done and I can't wait to read more!

- Salty Q

I admit, this would be my second read of this fic. I read it on the limp-sam site, but had to head over and just tell you how fantastic this story is!

I'm just gob-smacked at your brilliance - every chapter kept me entralled and wanting more, right up until the very end. And now, I still want more.

Can't tell you how much I'd love you to write a new story.

"Bobby finally sat at the edge of the Sam’s bed and found himself sliding down to the floor. He placed his elbows on his bent knees and rubbed his weary hands through his graying hair. God, he could see why he never wanted to be a parent. Between the worry, the pain of seeing the boys suffer, the fear for their safety and well being, and the anxiety of not knowing what the future held for them, John’s boys had nearly put him in an early grave. Somehow, deep inside, if the gruff old hunter would admit it, he knew he had already become a parent. These boys weren’t just John’s boys, they were his boys as well."

Good grief, girl, with all you've put our boys through, if it weren't for Bobby, they'd have been long gone! Bobby is amazing and your story displays his love, protectiveness and devotion to the WInchesters. I love the way you've written him in, as it is sometimes difficult to pull in extra characters when it comes to our boys. But you've done it beautifully.

-peace-

~ Salty Q

Rachelly,

Once again, well done, girl. Por Sammy. And poor Dean, basically having to take care of helpless, unconcious "Sasquotch". Heehee.

I don't remember what chapter this was in-it was a few chapters ago, but it's wonderfully written and displays Sam's conflicting feelings perfectly:

"But the worst of it all was watching Dean get beaten mercilessly because of him, his curse. He knew Jake was bent on killing his ‘demon soldier’ when he fired the weapon into his leg, but what horrified him was that he was going to be taking his brother with him to the grave. Because of his abilities, his brother and best friend was going to be murdered. It tore his soul in two and he remembered cursing his existence and something inside of him shattering."

I just wanna hug Sam while I read this. I want him to be better so him and Dean can fight together, side by side! Winchester style! Heehee.

As always, I will try to keep you updated on where I am, and I just wanted to drop a line and let you know I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Yes, I am a bit of a "speed reader" and no, the violence and language doesn't phase me a bit! :)

I was right, I was thinking Sam was having a nightmare that was so awful, he couldn't handle it. I'm glad Dean was by his side immediately and helped him work through it. Loved the tender moment, the little flashback to the past and the bit of teasing to lighten it up a little without taking away from the seriousness. You balanced this wonderfully. Great how Dean related to Sam and let him know how he felt and in turn becoming more aware of his brother's feelings. How Sam was finally able to convince him, that it was better to tell the truth then trying to protect him, because it hurt more not to know. The banter, again the remote control issues and the gummy worm sugar highs (I know how my already hyper daughter gets), the yodeling and Sam siding with poor Bobby, absolutely priceless and wonderful because it was just what i needed in between all the heavy emotional issues. I really appreciated how you helped Sam out by having him go to the graves of Ellen and Jo. How he made this decision, not sure if he could handle it and how he knew he needed Dean on his side. It was wonderful to see the healing that came out of this. For Sam's subconscious to finally embrace the forgiveness was well worth the pain. Loved the end, when Bobby left, how Dean actually got emotional too. The bond that has formed between them is a joy to see. I'm glad you didn't eliminate the threat totally. It made it more realistic and also showed how much Dean has grown throughout the story, now seeing his brother as an equal, although he will always feel the need to protect him. The physical workout, jogging side by side made a fitting end, showing a lot of the equality of the brothers and some of Sam's growth. And that they are ready to take on the world again. Overall, I loved how you let the healing be gradual, with many up and downs, it made it so much more believable. There is so much more to say than I can ever express but you have the ability to take me on a roller coaster ride and make me enjoy it. You know exactly how to balance action, emotions and banter and make me relate to the characters. And even more important, you don't make them stand still, but let them grow and become better, stronger and maturer. Hugs, Vonnie

"But like a cruel novel that keep throwing its characters into oceans of agony, trying to accomplish angst in the hearts of its readers, fate kept seeming to toss his little brother back out to sea, requiring Dean to struggle desperately to reel him back in, or lose him forever within its murky depths."

Oh, Rachelly. . . . this describes how we all feel reading this. You sly girl, you. Tossing poor Sam repeatedly into the abyss of uncertainty and harm! Honey, you're killing the Sammy lovers like me! ; )

You are so talented! I will write again when I get further in the story! (I swear, I've been getting nothing done lately thanks to you're incredible writing!) LOL

Peace

- Salty Q