You sure didn't lie, when you said things were picking up again. Between Dean dealing with Gordon and Bobby dealing with the other hunter, it got quite intense. Gordon turned out to be more sneaky then I thought, but I can believe it, because he is very determined and coldblooded. Wouldn't take much to figure out a plan and get to Sam, while poor Dean isn't suspecting anything. Hats off to your muse, this is awesome writing. Once again you stayed true to the brotherly love, Dean trying to distract Gordon to keep Sam save and Sam demanding for Bobby to go back for Dean. Hugs, Vonnie

Ok, so I tackled chapter seven now. It has been a roller coaster ride for me, just as much as for Dean, because I felt for and with him. All your loving details are awesome. You didn't promise too much, when you talked about brotherly love. Dean really done well with it. Loved the way Sam pretended to be still unconscious. I can understand he enjoyed the brotherly moment he wouldn't get otherwise. But the kiss on the forehead really topped it off, it was like the cherry on top of the ice cream and whipped cream - really awesome. Too bad that they think Jo and Ellen are dead, I for my part still have doubts, but I will find out later. Loved that you brought Bobby in, he is one of my favorites. Hugs, Vonnie

I really want to go on with this, feel I need to, but I just can't. You left me exhausted. I need to take a break until tomorrow. The devastation that Dean had to feel at the end of this chapter is just beyond words. You have done an awesome job of describing it throughout the last two chapters. The constant balancing between hope and despair. Every time it seemed like Sam finally got a break, he received another blow. I loved how you described Jo, shaken but holding her own. Somehow I can see her this way because looking at Ellen and the strength she has, it seems like her daughter just has to be like this, only younger, not as quite as strong yet. I also really like how Sam finds strength in Dean and how Dean always finds a way to go on because of Sam. This is what makes both of them strong. Like Dean says in S4 finale - they are each others strength but also each others weakness.

Ok, so I started and read the first three chapters. I have found myself pretty much breathless with the description of the fighting and the way Jake and the others beat Dean and Sam up. I suffer with Sammy as he tries to breath, wheezing and coughing with him and suffer the unbearable pain of the bullet wounds. I suffer with Dean as he tries everything in his power to get their attention away from Sam, so save his little brother. As he feels Sam's pain and helplessly has to watch. This is more intense than a movie. Just wanted to let you know I'm enjoying it tremendously. Hugs, Vonnie

Wow, I feel like I've ridden quite the roller coaster. It was an emotionally full filling ride. There are so many great limp Sam writers out there, and I'm playing catch up. You are definitely a great limp Sam writer and I'm glad I discovered your work. I plan on reading all of it as I get time. :0)gidgetgal9/Claudia

Aw *happyface*. Nice happy end. The visit at the graveyard was really important, I think. It was nice to not forget the two women. And again I realized, what an amazing writer you are. The way you "play" with the words... great. Made my heart ache. Great. Love this story and will probably be back one day to read again.

See, I knew it!

*sigh* It actually looks like they did it? Did they? Well only two more chaps and knowing you... well you probably still got an ace somewhere hidden in your sleeve.

Poor (stupid) Sam. Jumping into the water like that to rescue a scumbag. He just can't help it.

This time Sam and trouble met halfway *headdesk*. Holy cow, that boy is too good for his own good.

Wow, you never go halfways, do you? As usually, I loved the interaction between Sam, Dean and Bobby. Making Sam think Dean is dead was not funny... at least not for Sam :-) I'm pretty curious how exactly you're going to end all this *jumpstonextchapter*

Oh no, not again ... as the bowl of petunia would say (don't worry, you don't have to get the joke). You know, I knew that the deep fall would come eventually but does it have to be this was? Poor Dean, looks like Sam still has these stupid self esteem complexes. This can't be good.

Oh, and bold totally doesn't cover it. Not even close. More like... suicidal *lol*. Oh Sam I'd like to be one to give his life a meaning *blush*

What the heck was going on with the cashier? There's something so not kosher going on, I swear *giggle*.

Hm, looks like Josh is one of the good guy. At least for the time being. But let me tell you... I don't like him *grumble*. He's mean... and he pisses off Dean. Never a good sign.

I loved Deans pep talk :-D Even made ME want to live a few years longer just to please others, hehe. But every time I press the down-button on my keyboard I'm looking for new catastrophes. Poor Sam. I'd like to give him sponge bath right now though :-D Can I? Okay, stop me. I'm tired and my eyes are sore. Will go on reading tomorrow.

Did I mention how much I love your Sam-limpness?

Anja

“I’m so looking forward to the woods...” That is so Dean. I loved this chapter. Kept spitting my milk over my keyboard. Quite a soup in it anyway. Yuck! But it was really funny. Though I do have quite a bad feeling about Joshua.

Here I'm back, reading on. Long chapter with so many details. Details are cool. How do you know all of this? Got medical education? Okay, have to go on reading. :-)