WOW! NICE CHAPTER!

Holy cow, that was a long tale! Took me three nights of reading for four or more hours to work through it all! I have to admit that I thoroughly enjoyed it all, especially the ribbing between Dean, Bobby, and Sam. My favorite parts were definitely the "Nab the spoon" and the channel flipping to annoy Sam, though. I giggled like a mad-woman!

If there was one thing that irritated me, though, it was the constant referencing of Sam and Dean's guns as a "piece". If anything, I'd change it up a little like you started to toward the end there with "gun", "weapon", ".45", or even the weapon brands. I know there's a site out there dedicated to identifying all the different weapons that Sam and Dean use-the weapon's box or something like that.

On the other hand, kudos to you for all the research on medical terminology and conditions, treatments and suchnot that I'm sure you had to do for this fic. It was very believable!

As for your virtual chocolate addiction, I think you earned like 29 of those 5 lb hershey's chocolate bars, lol. Let it never be said that I don't reward fic writers well! xD

Lastly, thanks a TON for taking the time to write this story for us!

I like this look at a broader hunter community. They are all rough guys. I hope Joshua takes care of Derek and Brecken. Wasn't too cracked up about Sam in this one. I know it's in his character not to want to hurt anyone, but he is risking Dean's life and causing Dean great emotional pain when Dean is already hurt. Nice tense chapter. Me likey.

wow. I just read the last seven chapters in the last hour. Its a really, really good story. The plots interesting and so suspensful and the characters are kept in check. If this were a book I'd buy it. I hope you plan on writing other SPN stories.

Thanks for this 's great!:)

Good Story !

It's so sad et happy in the same time.

The character are amazing, all ! You know write you should be a writer ! lol

Good Job seriously !

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Hey! I'm baaaacccckkk! And OMG. I cannot believe this! Derek and Bracken make me sick. They are worse then the demons. I want to kill them, slowly and painfully. But that would make me just like them, so I'll let Dean do it! Haha :)

Much love,

Oberdrive

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What the heck? I can't believe this! I'm freaking out. Sam is without Dean? This is not good. Oh no. What do you have planned? When things like this happen, I hate not knowing the end lol. I know it's not a death fic, but it doesn't rule out anything else! Thanks for keeping it suspenseful. :)

Much love,

Oberdrive

Oh how Dean and Sam make me laugh! The peanut butter cracked me up! This chapter was good, I'm glad Sam is finally recovering. I don't think Dean is completely over the chip aisle thing though... And I wondered what was up with the cashier. Then I read the very last paragraph and OMG! I gotta read next chapter...

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Oberdrive

I'm so sorry miss. It has been a crazy few days. I went from reading three or four chapters a day to like one every other day. I really hope Joshua does listen to Sam and Dean. I wanna find out who else is after Sam. :)

Much love,

Oberdrive

Awe poor Sam! I understand where he is coming from-well I've never had anyone die for me nor do I have visions that lead a yellow-eyed demon to me-and I get his pain. Things just get too much for our mind to handle, and that is why there are suicides, not that this is a death fic hehe. It sucks to see how low he has gotten... He is truly reaching rock bottom. But you know what? Once you hit bottom, the only way left is up. :) And if Sam would just tilt his head upward instead of the impending bottom, he'd notice Dean with his outstretched hand trying desperately to reach him, to help him conquer. Speaking of Dean... He has a great idea that the demon wants Sam because Sam will eventually kill him. Heck, I'd want someone dead if I knew somewhere down the road they were gonna succeed in killing me! And Joshua... Grr. He is so blunt. I can tell he cares for the boys, but the way he does things... I just don't agree. Least Sam is finally having a say! Woah, I need to cut my review... See you next chapter my dear!

Much love,

Oberdrive

Enter Joshua! I was wondering when he would be playing a role. I don't really know how to feel about him. He rubs me the wrong way, so I'm suspicious. Then again, you've seen how I've guessed throughout this story and have been wrong numerous times. BTW, the beginning was crazy. Poor Lindsey, but Sam always comes first! I've never had that kind of dream before. If I'm dreaming, I'm not aware of the outside world lol. I like how sentences would get finished from the outside. Tis very cool. I sense major "big brother mode" ahead. Sweet!

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Oberdrive

No worries honey! I love this fic. I'm crazy about it. Last chapter was just a blah for me. I occasionally have those :) this chapter focused on Dean and I'm glad. I'm all for Sam being hurt severly, but it is good to see Dean hurting too, as if he didn't it wouldn't seem real. I want you to know this story feels real. You brought it to life. Well done. Dean does have a severe "protect sam no matter what" disability. I admire him, even if he is being stupid (like not taking care of himself). Sam makes Dean, well, Dean. There isn't much more that can be said. )

Much love,

Oberdrive

This chapter made me a little mad... I don't know why but I was frustrated with Dean. I completely understand his way with Sam, I really do, but sometimes he is just too stubborn. In his position, I'd probably so the same thing (though I'm the baby in my family lol), it's still stupid. If he gets worse, how will he help Sam then? Glad Bobby finally demanded Dean to listen to him. Other than that another great chapter! I really wonder how much Sam's body can handle... Food for thought!

Much love,

Oberdrive