Reviews for Commentarius
g chapter 32 . 6/4/2018
please continue this story ! ahhhhh i can’t live like this
Guest chapter 8 . 5/31/2018
*your personal slave sounds perfect
not you're
maybe Lily isn't so perfect after all? :)
LizzyBennet2 chapter 32 . 5/29/2018
I have to be honest—I was wrecked when I got to the end of this only to realize it wasn’t completed. I couldn’t read anything for weeks. Wrecked. Please finish.
rmato1286 chapter 32 . 5/24/2018
I just wanted to tell you this story is even better the second time around. I’ve read the snippets for the next chapter and am incredibly excited for your next update! Hope all is well!
Guest chapter 32 . 5/16/2018
FINISH IT!
geekzgalore chapter 32 . 5/14/2018
This was my first fanfic :) love it.
Have you given it up?
Guest chapter 28 . 5/10/2018
You're amazing.
Katniss05 chapter 32 . 5/9/2018
It's AWESOME! But please, please, please complete it...I'm dying to read what happens next. Also that cliffhanger of 5 days later with the dairy entry suggesting that some adventure occurred is coming nothing to calm my nerves. PLEASE finish the story...I REALLY need to know what is going to happen !
Guest chapter 28 . 5/3/2018
I love this story but I cringe every time you use the word molestation as a joke
hewololol chapter 32 . 4/30/2018
PLEASE CONTINUE
Guest chapter 32 . 4/28/2018
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! ITS TOO GOOD TO WASTE!
Lady.Vill chapter 32 . 4/27/2018
2018 and i am still reading your fanfic. Please, update!
notila is great chapter 32 . 4/27/2018
Where is the next chapter, I'v been waiting for months
bob the rob chapter 6 . 4/25/2018
I read till chapter six and to me what is this a piece of shit?
jilystar04 chapter 32 . 4/21/2018
Ok, private message me on this please because I NEED TO KNOW WHEN YOU WILL BE UPDATING, YOU ARE KILLING ME SLOWLY DAY BY DAY, thanks J x
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