|Reviews for How Did This Happen?|
| Cutter12 chapter 31 . 8/2/2012
The set up to this story was wonderfully different. Nice to see Don still stand by Charlie while everyone else thought the worst. Quite understandable, though, I'm glad to see you didn't make the others as the bad guys. Though Alan was pretty close to being on my miffed list and, I'm sure this wasn't your intention, but I was feeling really sorry for poor Amita. :)
Both Merrick & Tompkins ARE on my miffed list. Glad Don gave Merrick that black eye.
Wonderful story, and I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.
| deadsnowwhite chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I think you have a good story plot here and for the most part I really like your story the thing that I really don't like about it is that don dosen't know charlie's wife at all and you have him maddly in love with her to the point were he is more upset about her maybe moveing away then his brother? but besides that i do think you have a good story here and i think that alan recation is very real I just I could get pass the don thing to read the rest :(
| epalladino chapter 31 . 7/9/2009
Excellent story. I love your OCs and the relationship between Don, Charlie, and Alan.
| Jamiie numb3rs chapter 31 . 1/31/2007
very nice story. do you have a sequel already? I mean, what happened to Amita? :(
| Patty chapter 31 . 1/31/2007
And I loved each one of the chapters in your longest story!
Excellent job, girl. The plot was outstanding, completely off
the charts in originality.
Please tell me Charlie will reconsider his rebuff of Tompkins
and all things NSA. I expecially liked that relationship,
although it may be just a happy hangover from Season 1.
A sequal sure sounds good to me. Don's strong attraction to
Colleen should be given a second chance and the Charlie/Amita
affair needs some serious discussion. At this point those two
really need to talk!
| Patty chapter 30 . 1/31/2007
Beautifully done chapter. No one does brother talk as well you.
| Patty chapter 29 . 1/31/2007
That's no way to do it, Don. She swept you off your feet. Relent and tell the girl she'll
be hearing from you in the near future, when Charlie gets back on his feet. You know she was
just doing her job, the same as you've been forced to do so many times. Give her a break!
I LIKE Colleen. LOL
| Patty chapter 28 . 1/31/2007
Sorry to hear about the possible glaucoma, FraidyCat. Since I'm running behind reading
this, hopefully by this time the doctor has decided its something different and can be handled easier. Sure hope so anyway. We need you and your eyes around here!
I love the idea of the big, strong G-Man buying a strawberry milkshake for his little
| Deinde chapter 3 . 1/27/2007
This may seem a little irelivant, but charlie can't drive.
| dHALL chapter 31 . 1/26/2007
You've still got it sista!
Looking forward to the THUNDER!
| Patty chapter 27 . 1/26/2007
What a sweet last line. Alan always says the right thing.
| Patty chapter 26 . 1/25/2007
" . . . those huge, stunned eyes." I can see them now.
The reunion was great. Just the right amount of sentiment and the way it happened was
totally unexpected. Good job. Now I'm anxious to get Alan's reaction.
| Patty chapter 25 . 1/25/2007
Oh my gosh, FraidyCat, you have NOT lost the magic touch. My heart is pounding a mile a
minute. Knowing Don's run. Aww, Charlie. You do love and trust your big brother, don't you!
| Patty chapter 24 . 1/25/2007
Good for Megan! Don better not get mad at her. Even if he's sidelined in the command
vehicle, he's not just having to stand and wait.
Poor Charlie, I'm sure he knows by now it's no porn film.
| Patty chapter 23 . 1/25/2007
Oh man, I love it. How exciting can you get!
I don't know anything about programming, etc. either but this sure sounds good to me.