Reviews for Black Darkness
Shark Byte chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
That was a very cool short story, I like it :)
I just hope Fumio doesn't freak out :P
Lina Girl chapter 2 . 4/10/2009
Wow, this is a pretty good story so far! A little rushed, and make sure u check all the gramamtical errors, but other then that small stuff it's really good! Keep it up. :)
lieutenant spark chapter 2 . 9/13/2008
please write more thanks
Sacha T chapter 2 . 3/8/2008
socorro13 chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
omg it sounds like what happened in hero's w/ the latino bro and sis who can cause an illness.. oh man that'd be creepy to see!

great job!yay!
hitsuzenbutterfly chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
Excellent story plot! Please continue on with this. I'll put this on my alert list.
Neko.Writer chapter 2 . 10/16/2007
great story it was awesome and yea i was disappointed in the ending that they gave but this is awesome! now off to read the sequel!
Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare chapter 2 . 8/22/2007
really interesting idea. i kind of like Usui being a makes for a longer-lasting relationship for them, which is sweet. w
kyougirl4ever chapter 2 . 8/6/2007
wow that was so good. write more yeah?
darkangelwings90 chapter 2 . 7/15/2007
*looks side to side frantically* wh- where's the rest? i love the fanfic! please update soon!
Maru Maru-chan chapter 2 . 5/26/2007
Wow. Short. But unusually statisfying. Imma read the sequel now, kay?
Maru Maru-chan chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
I'm going to go easy on you with the criticizing. You hae too much exclamations. Other than that, your story's pretty good!
Angelfly06 chapter 2 . 4/4/2007
Aw it's sweet! I loved it!
kayla chapter 2 . 3/9/2007
plz continue i have a 10m yr old neice reading this and she wants u 2 continue.
Ryuuzaki-hugs chapter 2 . 2/10/2007
WA! Don't leave it up to my imagination!

(calming down)

I really liked your story, but i wish you had kept going!

Is there any possibility of you continuing?

I will bake you cookies if you continue ;)
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