Reviews for Guardian of My Heart
TinyTurtleSasuNaruLover chapter 7 . 8/29/2014
I absolutely love your idea with the hearts and stuff. It's utterly adorable. I figured you won't be continuing with this fanfiction, from the amount of time you left it for. Which is sad because I think its great. Adorable in fact. :)
Haruka Uzumaki21 chapter 7 . 5/19/2014
Great chapter :) I love this story update soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Really good so far
Guest chapter 7 . 1/30/2013
More Gaara/Neji . it was great but I guess it just took a long time for the plot to play out and there wasn't enough time to enjoy them actually being together.
Kitsune1818 chapter 7 . 10/15/2012
This is the first time I read an idea like this. Its something new, I like the characterization of the characters involved, also I love ItachixNeji, but I can live with some GaaraxNeji. Sometimes this remind me of Holic xxx by CLAMP... sort of.

I want to hope you didn't drop this but... its been 4 years since the last update, are you going to continue this?
linda31 chapter 7 . 4/30/2012
i know it's been three years since you last updated this, but seriously, you should continue this. it is a good story with interesting development.
brokenangle5 chapter 7 . 7/7/2011
This is an amazing story and i would aboustly kove it if you continued this story. I know you probably have forgotten this story but it would be nice to see how this story ends.
Myou-mori chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I love this story! I lost it and found it again about a year later. How you write your characters and the plot is just so great. I only have one problem...why have you not updated? It's too good to let go. So...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!
secret25 chapter 7 . 4/3/2010
Okay first of all that ending was just adorably sweet!

Next: OMG YOu must be a freaking genius. You must be! There's just no denying it! This plot is amazing. How did you even think of it? It truly is very creative. Just the first chapter and I was intrigued. Who wouldn't be though right? Anyway I love your story very much!

I do wonder though there's still so many things to work out. Like for example how is Itachi handling this? He's coping right? He'll find someone eventually, someone who he'll love and love him back right?

There's also the matter of why Shukaku has two forms in Tsukiyomi. And how he was able to defeat Sparrow by just a physical contact that drains chakra? That's what happened right?BTW Love how you pulled Tsukiyomi and other things here. ( , curse seal, chakra, Akatsuki, shukakau and Kyuubi, etc) Oh and other thing, I lOVE Shukakau here! He's just adorable!

There's also that slimy Snake and his minion to worry about.

And actually I believe it was in this chapter that Gaara pointed something out that I had thought of when you you had revealed that Neji would fall in love with Gaara because of the potion. How is this going to to work out you know? When Gaara truly falls for Neji then how can Gaara be reasured? All he'll keep thinking about then is that the only reason Neji loves him is because Neji's being forced to by the potion. Won't that make him miserable?

Another things what about Neji? What happens if or when (surely when) he finds out that he's under a love potion? How can he convince himself that it's truly what he feels and it isn't fake? I mean he can't just ask his heart cause he'll still think that Loveless is being influenced by the potion. BTW, how's Loveless coping?

So many more things to happen and I simply can't wait.

And again, I'd like to reiterate that I love this! Guardian of My Heart truly is a work of art.

Now, it's been a while since you updated this story and really all of your stories and I'm wondering just like I'm sure so many are, what are your plans? Will you still update your fics? Will you come back to writing? How are you doing? Are you alright? and finally WHere are you?

Hopefully you will come back to this story and to your other works. PLease update as soon as you can And if you can please let me know of you plans. PM me or reply to this review. I'd like to know if you're updating please.

Thanks for the amazing read!

secret25

PS. I'm sorry for the really long review...
vasana chapter 7 . 12/31/2009
OMG! You did such a good job incorporating random allusions into this story! And it's so interesting too. My only question is, DID YOU DISAPPEAR OFF THE FACE OF THE PLANET? You haven't been active for over 1 1/2 years now! xO Please update within the next few months at least!
azure sea chapter 7 . 8/4/2009
it's a very interesting story and i like it very much!

but i still have a question to ask: what kind of world are we in? is this the world where shinobis exist or a whole new world? like AU? at first i thought that it is AU, but then i find words like chakra or ANBU. please explain? because i'm still a bit confused.

otherwise, it's well written and i can see that you don't rush their relationship except the love potion. i am very curious what id going to happen in the future, so please update soon!

azure sea
XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 7 . 7/4/2009
OMG! gaara is so cute in this chapter! Can'wat to read more!~
7troublesome chapter 7 . 2/27/2009
Liked your story. DO you plan to continue? Liked the very idea of Neji having such excuisite business. Very surprised to know about new veiw on Akatsuki :) very touching sceens... thanks
Corvin chapter 7 . 9/14/2008
OMG!

-Kills self-

Dude! I never realized that I didn't review this chapter! I deserve a terrible scolding! I'm so sorry!

I love it! Through everything, over all this time you have maintained a window smashing incredible story that I love! Complete with love triangles (that are always fun) and Kankurou (Who is a sex God)

I love it, I love you, I hope for another update son~

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UchihaJIS chapter 6 . 9/1/2008
i love this couple, i really do..

but i'd rather like itachi and neji together.. they make a better couple in this story. I feel sorry for Itachi. :"(
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