Reviews for Of Necklaces and Tenth Birthdays
woo chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
This was good. Thanks for sharing. Maiko ftw! :)
iCe chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
So sweet!

Thanks for writing!
Luna Noctua chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Interesting.

...I wonder what happens next.

-Luna Noctua
Kiminator Mark XII chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
AAW! so fluffy!

I didn't think the characters were too OOC.

Keep bein' awesome!;)

~KMXII~
prettygirl17 chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
I thought I already reviewed this... I just found it again and saw I didn't review! Oops. Ahwell. This story is perfect. REalistic and cute. I luvs it so much!
ShinigamiKyuu chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
Aw!
SpiritoftheWhiteRose chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
oh how sweet...
libowie chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Aw, this makes me want to jump up and dance!
Phoenix'sSoul chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Its how you say cute.
starrzjsc chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
ha...so...cute...must...readagain...
Lovii chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Aww, So sweet .. I loved it
swan-swan chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Sque, chibi fluff love!

Very nice...I loved the awkwardness of the situation, the whole "I guess this is how I'm supposed to do it..." thoughts. Very realistic.

The dialogue had a contraction problem..."I'll put it on you," would probably be what a nervous twelve-year-old would say.

Also, if it was her birthday, it would probably be her eleventh...if he was twelve. If it was her tenth, he would be eleven. Just a technical detail...I think...

Hang on...

Fifteen vs. sixteen...eh, never mind, it could be that she just had a birthday and he hasn't hit his yet. So disregard that, I think...

Good job.
sweet little aka kitsune-chan chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
i stopped reading avatar fanfics for a little while and began to read "The Outsiders", then i fogot y i han't read avatar in a while but when i clicked on the the page all i saw was "ZUTARA, ZUATARA, ZUATARA, ZUATARAP-argh"...ok im done lol but then i saws this THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS ITS SO ADORABLE I LOVE MAIKO THERE SO CUTE TOGETHER...im sorry i told you that big story *bushes and looks down* i just like to talk alot i suppose...oh well wonderful story it made me want to read my avatar now

favs.

~Rini Koi
thetemptedangel chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
ohh... cute :D

i like maiko, too... as well as zutara, and jetara... *sheepish*

but anyways, cute, and i love it :D
Calicy chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
I actually think Zuko is in character from his younger self. Even Mai wasn't so OOC that I wanted to claw out my eyes. Kudos! I haven't throw up yet so it must be good.