Reviews for Expel The President
truephan chapter 5 . 9/1/2012
Hiya, crazyvi!

I agree, that this ending is rushed, but I can't complain too much since at least you DID finish it. (It's more annoying to me when an author doesn't finish what he/she started!)

Still, I'm also not complaining too much because it ended happily. Danny gets his life back and gets the girl! Perfect!

Hope you continue to write DP stories. I will refrain from the ones you know I don't read about (slash). Otherwise, welcome back! truephan
tsukinopen chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
hahaha
truephan chapter 4 . 1/10/2009
-미친: You're cooking up some real zingers on getting Danny in trouble. Of course, I don't like to see my hero doing this much purposeful mischief, but teenage boys are prone to that, as EfaE showed. Good job with that. 진정한판티엣
DandNsGirl chapter 4 . 12/22/2008
Wow, wonder if Danny will get in trouble this time.
Vi chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
cool
DandNsGirl chapter 3 . 6/22/2008
I wonder, does Danny really want to be expelled, away from his friends? Well, can't wait for more!
truephan chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
-미친: Now I'm reviewing the RIGHT chappie! LOL! Do you really think Danny would want to go to another school away from his two best friends? I don't know about that one! But, still, I'll roll with it. Nice job. 진정한판티엣
truephan chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
-미친: I meant to review this chappie instead of chap 3! oops! anyhow, I am still interested how Danny became class prez in the first place! Now about chap 3: I really don't want to think that Danny would want to get into that much trouble...he gets into enough 'supernatural' trouble to add more to the pot! nice job. 진정한판티엣
truephan chapter 3 . 6/20/2008
-미친: Well, looks like this story started after 'another' story! I'm VERY interested on how Danny got to be Class Prez in the FIRST place! Anyhow, nice job! 진정한판티엣
Grumbles chapter 3 . 6/19/2008
Somewhat short, a few spelling errors, and the relationship between Danny and Sam seemed kind of rushed.

But other than that, this is a very good story! There isn't anything too detrimental in the beginning, but perhaps you could look closer for errors in later chapters.

Also, your word selection has me at odds. He's trying to get expelled from school, right? But if he's just trying to get out of his spot as class president, the process by which that happens is called impeachment. If it's just Danny trying to get expelled from school then there's no problem. But if he's just trying to get out of being president, then impeachment and eviction from office would be more appropriate terms to use in the future. You did, however, already start writing and it isn't that big of a problem.

Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more from you.
Queen S of Randomness 016 chapter 3 . 6/19/2008
wow...Danny just can't seem to get expelled no matter what he does.

yet another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! - :)
QueenLisa chapter 2 . 2/19/2008
haha the tofu sandwhich.
QueenLisa chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
aw first lady
DandNsGirl chapter 2 . 6/8/2007
Yay! An update! Great chapter.
Queen S of Randomness 016 chapter 2 . 6/8/2007
YAY! AN UPDATE! AWESOME JOB! I HOPE U UPDATE SOON! :D
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