Reviews for Unstoppable
pennedbyme chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
i think your ending to the flashback was great! it gave me shivers reading it. and "your blood was causing a ruckus down at the dorms".. that's just the typicla thing i would expect him to say to keep things seemingly 'cool' between them.. i loved it!

but yeah, he did ramble on too much in the POV, and your narration from third person perspective was a lot more impressive..
Zaiaku Dyuu chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
{It must be} Wow, this was well written. Keep writing! {hard for Kain.}

~ Zaiaku Dyuu
Joanie1119 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Nice! I didn't find you took Kain OOC much at all. In fact, I take him as someone with a lot on his mind but chooses not to share often, except to the lucky readers of this story. I hope you expand on this one day. I really like how to work with his perspective.
Peace Heaven chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
Wow, finally i see one fanfic of Kain and Ruka. I like your fic a lot. Keep it up
shysie chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
This story is heartwarming!

They'd make a cute couple! I hope you write another KainxRuka fic.
frostedheavens chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
neat oneshot,keep it up. Things often tend to go a little haywire when you're daydreaming,so it's quite ok. XD