Reviews for PreDest 2: When Mom's Away the Demons Will Play
KarenF chapter 14 . 10/14/2015
Love all your stories...
The characters are well described and there is detailed attention to both characters and story line...It's very well done, and I enjoy reading your stories over and over...! Please complete others...
Wilko chapter 14 . 6/19/2014
I love this story! I like that Wyatt may be powerful but is a bit short in the brains department and it's Chris who comes up with the plans. That fits in with the show where we saw Chris as highly strategic and always thinking ahead as well as able to come up with a plan on the fly/think on his feet.

I do think that Chris should be more powerful with more active powers than you've made him though. He is part Elder this time around, so should have more powers and most definitely the electrokinesis one they used, as that was something that all Elders, no matter how new or old had. It was sort of like orbing, it was part of their being, so Chris should have inherited that plus things like the invisibility etc. Or is that something for a future story?

Also, both Wyatt and Chris should have the glamouring ability that Paige demonstrated, as that is part of the whole whitelighter/Elder package. Plus, I always thought that it should be Chris who inherits Excalibur; as Wyatt is supposedly more powerful (but perhaps not so much more in this new timeline as Chris is now part Elder…), it would make sense for the sword to go to Chris (as in, Merlin was more powerful [obviously] than Arthur, so to provide the balance, the sword was created for Arthur. Just a thought).

I love that DJ may be part demon but is best friends with Wyatt though; I think that show's great character on Wyatt's part, not to let that stand in the way of a friendship and is a thought for the future of magic. Poor DJ though - Wyatt and Chris betting on his success with women!

Please do come back to this series as it was really the best Charmed series out there.
VampiressOfZaksDreams chapter 14 . 8/12/2013
wow very awesome story.
Kerri chapter 12 . 3/23/2013
You do realize that wyatt is the most powerful being in the world and your making him out to be weaker than cris. Like for example Wyatt couldn't even but his shield up to protect himself from that arrow and he can't fight off a couple of demons, i think your missing something cause changing a character just to suit the plot is not smart writing
CastleScribe chapter 13 . 12/29/2012
Swedish meatballs. Really? You people are cruel to Wyatt and Chris.
Anyways, this fic made me laugh and it had/has a great story line. Love the idea and how it was written.
Thank you for writing a great story!
CastleScribe chapter 9 . 12/29/2012
One word - AWESOME.
Crystalzap chapter 14 . 12/20/2011
awesome! really love your 'pre' stuff ;)
riliya chapter 14 . 9/17/2011
1 word: fabulous !
Beizanten chapter 14 . 6/29/2011
This prove how valueble chris is they were so hellbent to kill him! poor guy! this chapter is so lighthearted and cute! can't wait till christ get a girlfriend!
Beizanten chapter 13 . 6/29/2011
This story is really amazing and suspenseful! Christ was really smart! i KNOW wyatt is the next king arthur but chris is even more strategist than he is so like king Arthur's advisor! Love that christ is always the brain master! IF I AM PIPER i WILL SUSPECT THE FACT THAT THE BOY JUST WAKE UP AFTER dj COME HOME
Beizanten chapter 12 . 6/29/2011
This story was amazing! Christ always have a plan B. I agree with victor, the parent should at least told christ then he will realize how important he is! Poor Wyatt! Love that he blame himself for hitting Christ. It make sense that wyat should be the responsible protector. Beside I don't think they could accept losing Christ a second time
Beizanten chapter 11 . 6/29/2011
This story is amazing. The hide and seek game is amazing! Love that they hide in other continent. Christ is really strong inside, if he can quickly bouce back after being hit! Poor Christ have such inferiority issue
Beizanten chapter 10 . 6/29/2011
Amazing story. Love the brotherly bond. The boy just can't live without the other. I feel so, sorry for the parent especially Derek. Christ should learn that he matter. It is hard to think one matter when you have twice bless as a brother but christ should realize he is love by so, many people
Beizanten chapter 9 . 6/29/2011
A really touching amazing chapter! Am really mad at elders right now even though it is to not expose magic but taking healing spell, what if there is emergency! Love that the boys can't live without each other!
Beizanten chapter 8 . 6/28/2011
This is magnificent. Poor wy feel so guilty. DJ and the ghost is hillarious and christ try to matchmake them. DJ should cut the guy some slack!
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