|Reviews for The Heir of the Founders|
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 20 . 10/12
Looked at the other stories, short, dropped, and tragic. Then checked the last chapter of this. Big freaking nope. Rather I hadn't even started reading this. I'm out.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 19 . 10/12
Another unpleasant chapter that I can't agree with. They had the family at the house rounded up due to worry of Voldy. The wards should've kept anyone not linked at bay unable to approach the door to even be considered to let in. Having to need to tear them down otherwise.
Yet in this one walks right up to the door and the others pop in ignoring the wards.
There's also Snape who should have informed him that everyone in the order was looking for him and they should know the absurd bs of Hermione being wanted. To think the Weasleys would know is bs in the first place. This attack shouldn't have happened.
Including the crap of drawing Harry out. He's in hiding cut off from everyone so even the order and those who know him can't find him. Obviously he wouldn't get word of an attack on the Weasleys so he could even be drawn out that way. In all likelihood he'd be waiting for the supposed safety of the school to be opened. So getting the drop on him at the station or the train would be the best course of action.
If not that than through Draco at the school.
And yet here it is with them of course just happening to finish and show up at an absurd time and another needless death that makes no sense in the first place due to wards.
At least not how it was done.
Hoped I'd enjoy this story and everytime I start to bullshit immediately sets it back if not putting it into the negatives. This chapter set it right into the negatives and in seriously about to drop this.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 15 . 10/11
Things I would think shouldn't go too far. Harry in front of the other families using his authority to have the floor should be able to out a lot of things and using an oath completely destroy Dumbles credibility and removing Hermiones wanted status.
However it was hinted things will be really bad thanks to Dumbles accusation against her.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 14 . 10/11
Fairly sure they should be speeding time up not slowing it down. Thats the opposite of what they need.
Speeding up let's you do more in less normal time like Haste. Slowing down has you doing less in relation to normal time.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 13 . 10/11
Well that plan should backfire. Harry if not Hermione should be aware of oaths and other means to prove that accusation as bs. Harry also has all those family names backing his authority now to stop any bs that Dumbles isn't aware of. So this I think should fail miserably after a possible initial bit of drama.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 12 . 10/11
Thats a massive assumption that they can quickly figure out time fuckery in a short amount of time with the knowledge in his head that he hasn't even looked into yet. He himself saying he doesn't know a key part and that he and her can figure that out succeeding in short order.
Nothing on the sand in the time turners?
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 11 . 10/11
Little confused on these memory issues. Wouldn't Dumbles erase the memories rather than just put blockers on Harry and Remus?
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 8 . 10/11
Still hate the parents deaths but eell done.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 5 . 10/11
Yeah. Massive negative with the unneeded deaths of her family. Also don't understand the stupidity of leaving one of the bastards alive to deliver that message.
One the needless risk of giving his identity.
Two he will know something when someone finds the bodies. Though he won't know the why and could potentially be left off guard which would be a great thing.
Third he risks not just getting him to be more prepared but more aggressive causing more lives lost sooner by giving this boogeyman impression needlessly.
Needless tragedy and dumb attempt at being badass causing more harm and really no good with this stupid act.
Ah and fourth letting one of the bastards involved in Hermione's families torture and death go for no "good" reason.
Really bad chapter.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 4 . 10/11
Aaaaand the sudden BIG negative. I figured this would be one that would finally avoid the whole Hermiones parents being mind fucked route. It was but in the worst damn way needlessly killing them off.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 3 . 10/11
*clap clap clap* Nicely done. Agreed just because he gained the knowledge doesn't mean he has the experience of actually using it. Or using it together. Occulamancy for example. Even if he gained knowledge of the best version doesn't mean his mind is already setup from its use or protections just suddenly in place.
Interested and disappointed there's only 130k. Its a nice setup so far and I really want to find a "good" long story. Seems like I found them all that I'm interested in. The HP site that existed or at least I learned existed having gone down for good before I realized it existed.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 2 . 10/11
Thats interesting. The only complaint I have is that I have a feeling he's not going to mention his friend pointed out he's covered in curses. Probably be a good idea to have those dealt with before taking any once in a life time trial and should be amongst the forefront of his mind to deal with.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 1 . 10/11
Not a big fan of the heir to all the Founders bit however those other names is rather new and overall its definitely got my attention. In a good way for sure. Going by the word count I get the feeling it was sadly dropped. Glad its at least over 100k. Hope its as good as the vibe I'm getting from it seems.
| Tony Moonstone chapter 32 . 9/11
I really liked the way the story went but...
You ended up saying in the last 10 chapters or so that's its being turned into a trilogy and it's been 16 years since you have worked on the sequel so I have go say the first part was AWESOME but my expectations have fallen short.
I can only hope that you will return to work on the trilogy someday.
| Tony Moonstone chapter 9 . 9/10
The vanishing objects were just plain funny and at certain parts hysterical.
It actually made me choke on the water I was drinking at the time. Thanks for surprising me.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!