Reviews for The Heir of the Founders |
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![]() ![]() So Hermione's parents are just killed in front of her and she goes shopping for a bit to feel better? Too lame and infantile for words, remove this crap to make room for better authors. Of course even a semi-intelligent cabbage would be a better author than you. It must be very sad to be you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, keep writing. Animagus soon, please? And bringing Ron in on everything. Can Harry make occlumens shields for other people? Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() does caliban find out who harry is? ahh! are you aware that there is this non-human slave in a shakespeare play called caliban. any hints for me there? or am i listening to my english teacher too much... |
![]() ![]() ![]() frustrating malfoy is good! eagerly awaiting the next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Keep up the good work, I cant wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a good husbaned he would make. Not to doteing, listens like a good doggy, and hot to boot. i love the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() You just had to put that image in my head didn't you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() rao! great story keep up the good work and don't forget to update. lyl socdel bnehlacc p.s is Magonagal(spelling?) in with dumbledore? p.p.s did snape ge affected in the curses on harry? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah! I always liked Remus, even though I downright hated the way they portraited the werewolf in him. And I do think Harry and Hermione's relationship went too fast, rarely do a pair catch on each other just by telling the other they love them. |
![]() ![]() I like that bit of originality (I haven't read anywhere) where Lupin does take Harry after investigating his homelife with the Dursleys. After all, with Voldemort absentia, who cares about the blood protections. Nice bit of writing! |
![]() ![]() That Harry is smooth! Nothing more erotic than having a date at the bank to have your girlfriend hear a list of your net worth. GO HARRY! That was very funny. Also, funny was the amounts you gave. 5,300,654 galleons and 4 knuts. |
![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. I really like the Harry/Hermione relationship in this story. It just makes sense that Harry is empathetic to Hermione since they both lost their parents and are both "only children." Falling in love with all the trauma between them seems more natural than a Ron/Hermione fic. |
![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. Money, power, fame, magic, beautiful girl on the back of your motorcycle. Who could ask for more! I'm interested to find out what Dumbledore's motivation are towards HP. If the goal is to protect against Voldemort, he should be happy as hell he's got a powerful ally. Why would Dumbledore threaten HP with all his machinations and manipulations? |
![]() ![]() Good chapter, but I found it odd that Hermione never mentioned her parents. She was distraught, but never mentioned her poor folks. Who cares about prophecies after such a traumatic event. I would not have moved from their bodies! She's seems detached like it occured weeks ago and she's starting to get over it. |