Reviews for The Heir of the Founders
mackiechandler chapter 3 . 10/15/2020
Just lovely. Has good characterizations and I love the goblins. The founders seem real. Well eWritten
Lars73 chapter 3 . 10/15/2020
Great story, love the gifts of the founders...
Lars73 chapter 1 . 10/15/2020
Chapter 1 is very interesting, looking forward to next chapter...
yarnfan4life chapter 10 . 10/1/2020
love it please write more
J flood chapter 32 . 9/19/2020
just wanted to let you know I finished your story wish the next one was already complete a very good story
Guest chapter 15 . 9/9/2020
THAT BASTARD!
THAT ABSOLUTE, UTTER, LYING, MANIPULATIVE, MOTHERFUCKING BASTARD!

HOW DARE HE-
HOW DARE-
HOW-
MY FUCKING GOD-

*begins to sputter incoherently*
Guest chapter 13 . 9/9/2020
Also, Albus is a lying shit. He is the true Dark Lord. Moldyshorts is just an annoying pest. But the nerve! The NERVE of Albus Fucking Dumbledore! How dare he! The complete bastard!
Guest chapter 13 . 9/9/2020
"My mother was Madeline Prewett. My father... was Albus Dumbledore."

waaahhhhtttttt?
waht?
WaHt
WAHT
Guest chapter 10 . 9/9/2020
Please, just kill off Skeeter. We know you want to.
Detsella Morningdew chapter 14 . 9/3/2020
I firmly believe that it does not matter if something is cliche just so long as you do that cliche *well.*

You do a lot of things that are done very, very often by stories in this specific "genre" of HP fanfiction. But you have done each in quite possibly the best manner I've encountered.
Detsella Morningdew chapter 3 . 9/3/2020
Based on your previous writing, I didn't quite expect you to make him Super!Harry, but I also don't think you'd just turn this into wish-fulfillment, either.

So it's actually an interesting twist despite it being a very common plot point in these kinds of stories.
Detsella Morningdew chapter 1 . 9/3/2020
I assure you that even though there are stories with a similar premise, yours is the first to actually provide enough background information and characterization that I don't just want to skim the first few chapters to get a basic idea of the premise before continuing with the meat of the story.

My point is, you write real characters while still setting up the plot, which instantly places yours above many others. (Some of which are still fun to read, mind.)

(It's been ages since I've actually seen Hedwig used more than just a convenient mail carrier, and often an inefficient one at that. Not to mention other characters.)
ReaderOfDramione chapter 1 . 7/25/2020
Ok so this is ok but it's too unreal that ALL of the founders heir is Harry and Honestly Hermione should get Ravenclaw or Slytherin
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 32 . 6/21/2020
Okay, I truly hope that Harry & Hermione aren't actually going to 'join forces' with the MOB and that this is all a ruse to get the old asshat off their backs!?

I hope Fawkes isn't kept waiting for release for all of the next story... Which I'm heading to right now, btw! ;D

Thanks for a great 1st story! I hope the sequel is just as good!

MelJ :D
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 31 . 6/21/2020
Yes! Yes! YES!
Whew! That was one hell of a fight scene; you had me on the edge of my seat! The end result was *not* a foregone conclusion! You did really, really well!
Now I have to take some breaths before I go on to the final chapter! ;D
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Onward! ;D
Thank you!
MelJ :D
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