Reviews for The Heir of the Founders
ReaperOfOaths chapter 8 . 10/22/2017
goddamn it I hate the way romance is introduced in 90% of fanfictions instead of a slow burn with situations to show it we just get called stupid and have it shoved in our face.
taxzombie chapter 15 . 9/8/2017
Found this tale via Sinyk's favorite list. I was surprised I hadn't read it before, considering it's age and that it was listed as 'complete'. Just finished this chapter, and while it is moving along well, I realized that I was nearly halfway done with it and it was still building. This made me suspicious so I popped to the last chapter. Where I discovered this was Part 1. So I immediately checked your story listing and found Part 2, all seven chapters which hasn't been worked on since January of 2009. Congratulations, you burned me. I blew it and did not check before I started reading. While I truly appreciate the time and effort that you and other fanfiction writers put into your tales the one thing I hate with a passion is when I find a good tale that gets left hanging. Case in point. Well should you ever decide to finish this tale I'll be back. As for now, I'm out of here.
jchangpa chapter 32 . 8/20/2017
Hell yeahs, good start, then start going south as all the stupidity it had and the end as spected BAD. but what can be spect from someone you prefer to save rapist and killers than do what was right.
jchangpa chapter 20 . 8/20/2017
If it was getting bad now is a complete bag of crap. This is stupid to a degree that it surpass any scale, saving the lazy moron could be accept but letting the others morons leave without consequence to pay is completely unacceptable.
jchangpa chapter 9 . 8/20/2017
The story up to here seems to be good. The thing with Ron is bad. No matter what you think a friend most be, a friend do not stab you on the back, do not do stupid thing because you have an inheritance and much less be jelouse of you because you succeed and you do not. He was lazy, mediocrity is his second name and what make him worst he has no education or even manners on how he treated women in general much less the only one who help him. As this is complete just for the Ron issue, the story is boarder line to be bad. Maybe ignoring any interaction of him will make it better. Just so you are clear, I do not hate Ron, but his stupidity place him just a little above Malforme, and yes I hate Draco.
IcyNyx chapter 1 . 8/12/2017
I alway thought of Dumblydore as manipulative
ashbelle chapter 9 . 7/26/2017
I love Dumbledore's reactions, absolutely hilarious!
Jharry1960 chapter 31 . 7/26/2017
I thought perhaps you might be better than so many of the common grade school writers. I kept waiting for cleverness and found weakness. My pet peeve. Convenient stupidity. In this case almost a dozen offenses of otherwise intelligent characters with knowledge and power to use abilities they had been given, completely forgot how to use them at the exact moment or in the right time frame for their expressed purposes. The most egregious, of course, was all the abilities and knowledge Harry had gotten from the founders. Pathetic. At least I will not waste my time further. Hopefully you have overcome the weakness of the lazy writer in the last decade. Even JKR fell prey to it dozens of times in canon. Good luck.
yarnfan4life chapter 9 . 7/11/2017
love it please write more
heart.dramione chapter 29 . 7/6/2017
draco was colin? how that happen...
heart.dramione chapter 27 . 7/6/2017
love the action in the chapie!
heart.dramione chapter 26 . 7/6/2017
glad together on this mission... love harry and other fighting spirit to end it... wonder what side is severus really on?
heart.dramione chapter 15 . 7/5/2017
like where the story is going.. happy to see caliban/draco yet again.. Would love the Severus again & his thoughts on what going on, ect!
heart.dramione chapter 10 . 7/5/2017
fallen in love with it & only chapter 10 ! A similar to another fic, that I have read- Where Harry found his power were bound, but it could be this story - the pairing was harry & hermione fanfic.. Onward to next chapies...
heart.dramione chapter 9 . 7/5/2017
great storyline & characters personalities...
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