Reviews for When Hero's Fall
Guest chapter 4 . 4/8/2013
Pity about all the spellung errors
Mage Spiret chapter 4 . 2/15/2007
love the chapter, great job keep up the good work and i am looking forwards the the next instalment.
scifigirl chapter 4 . 2/12/2007
Aw that was so sweet can't wait for you to update.
Ms Hobgoblin chapter 4 . 2/11/2007
Finally, Jeff did it and found himself again. I was not expecting him to cry though. It was very touching.

So Scott's next. I look forward to it!

Hob x
Mage Spiret chapter 3 . 1/19/2007
Love the story, great emotion. Please update soon, can't wait
Bridget Vreeland 1 chapter 3 . 1/18/2007
awesome chapter! please update soon!
Ms Hobgoblin chapter 3 . 1/18/2007
Well, it was worth the wait. You are very good at getting the emotions racing. I was on the edge of my seat, wondeing what was going to happen.

Looking forward to the next chapter, it will be good for jeff to notice his kids again...

Hob x
scifigirl chapter 2 . 1/14/2007
I was crying too! Keep going please. But can you put a tissue warning brforehand so i can be prepared! Well done on an ecellent piece of writing.
Ms Hobgoblin chapter 2 . 1/13/2007
You were crying? I'm almost in tears too!

God, that was an emotional one. This is great, keep it up. Poor scott, everything is on his shoulders again, at least Virgil is there to back himup. Lets hope the grandparents can help out a bit.

Hob x
thundever1 chapter 2 . 1/13/2007
Great chap, very sad but sweet, please update soon, poor everyone
Bridget Vreeland 1 chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
love! please update soon!
Ms Hobgoblin chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
Whoa, how wonderfully you have captured the family atmosphere, even when it started to go desperatly wrong.

This is a brillient start to your story, and I'm looking forward to the next heartbreaking chapter.

Well done.

Hob x
thundever1 chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
Great story, please update soon, very sad