|Reviews for Beneath the Hollow|
| SPN Mum chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
I really loved this series that you were writing. Why did you stop? I would love for you to continue it! Please try getting the mindset back and finish this story. The characters were so well written and the story just sucked me in. I read Strange Angels and loved it, then was so happy to see this sequel. I almost cried when I realized that you didn't continue it, so it isn't finished.
I'm begging for more!
| Duffster21 chapter 3 . 11/25/2009
ok i love it and i love it
yeah i know im repeating myself but it just needed to be repeated
so yeah i just started reading ur stuff a couple days ago
and can i just say that it is my computer form of chocolate... or coffee
wutever... it's addictive ok
updae when u can
| Stevie Jane chapter 3 . 5/1/2009
This is amazing! I love Charlie and this AU is unique and you make it so real and I hope you update soon!
| spnMom chapter 3 . 6/23/2008
Oh no, why did you stop? I am hoping all of the other stories finish this story. If so, you should probably make the story as complete. I guess where you stopped it could be an end for a shorter story. I am going to read some more from this AU and hopefully get more of the story. Thanks, I still really like this story.
| purplemidget chapter 3 . 3/3/2008
Awesome story! Please update it soon. I'm dying to know what happens.
| Jayy chapter 3 . 12/16/2007
This is such a unique series you've started. I don't think I've read anything like it.
Are you going update this?
| Celtergirl chapter 3 . 12/9/2007
I love this story. I just finished Strangee Angels, and it was wonderful. There are some AU stories that just kinda make sense, I guess this is one of them. Thanks for making the characters so real. I have to say I adore Charlie, I lve the fact that the heroine of this story is so imperfect that she is perfect. And also thanks so much for shirtless Dean and Sam, as always that just makes my toes curl. Keep up the fantastic work!
| iamborg chapter 3 . 11/12/2007
| l'ananaquiparle chapter 3 . 7/19/2007
i just discovered your stories and am now officially addicted to the strange angels 'verse. you write so well! yours characters have amazing depth, and the plots are interesting without being confusing. i'm looking forward to reading more! (insert begging/groveling/tears...please finish beneath the hollow! it's so good!)
| meilinglovesshaoran chapter 3 . 6/27/2007
Just found this story and the prequel and am loving it! Hope to read an update soon
| review-bunny chapter 3 . 4/15/2007
Wow! I just found Strange Angels and Beneath the Hollow. It's amazing! You're a very talented writer - I'm absolutely captivated! The storyline is top notch and I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
Please keep up the great work!
| The Goddess Aurora chapter 3 . 4/11/2007
Ah! I think I may be addicted. Nope, no maybe about it.
I believe I already told you I adore Charlotte? Let me reiterate, she is awesome. Thank you for putting Dean with some one who is not a. a hunter or b. a bimbo. It made it interesting.
Almost as interesting as you plot line, complex is a good describtive.
| carocali chapter 3 . 4/1/2007
I'm actually caught up! I can't believe it!
Well, Charlie and Dean are sure like rabbits aren't they? Yikes! And Poor Sam being tortured by Shem.. (sorry I couldn't find the spelling) every time, reminding him of Jess and eating a little more from the inside.
John redeemed himself a bit for me, but he still doesn't really understand what's going on. He knows JOHN'S way, but not the 'on the battlefield' way. Ah, someday the Winchesters will actually talk to each other.
I wish Sam would explain how difficult everything has been. Charlie certainly picked up on his internal struggles with the bad guy, but John and Dean don't have a clue how hard it is for him. I dont know what they'd be able to do for him, but maybe knowledge is power?
I wonder what will be bestowed on them when the rest of the 'crew' shows up...
| carocali chapter 2 . 4/1/2007
Oh, dear John...always the hunter. But he has NO idea what he's gotten himself into crossing Dean. I also find it SO ironic that John had been broken by the Circle and that they didn't understand what it was like to have evil in their belly. Oh the smackdown from Sammy when that comes out! I think John is completely clueless what his boys have been going through!
I like Ellen; Jo, I'm still not sure about, but there isn't much of her. Charlotte was wonderful and honest and pure. My heart also bleeds for little Ellie who SO loves these boys. I hope that she truly is the key to bringing the bad guys down.
Can't wait to see how this is resolved.
| Fireman Phil chapter 3 . 3/30/2007
I've never felt quite so frustrated as I did trying to find this chapter. Sometimes it could be located and other times it couldn't. I sure hope they get the system sorted out. however, that is not your responsibility.
This was a good follow up to the last chapter. I would say it was a lull in the action were it
not for those bedroom scenes with Dean and Charlotte. I'm not sure they were entirely
necessary (regardless of what your muse(s) thought).
For the first time, Charlotte disappointed me. I couldn't see her willingly allowing herself
to be drugged by Jo and John. Anyone, as clumsy as she is, could easily have spilled her
beer and excused herself. Given the nature of the welcome they received on their arrival,
she had no reason to trust anyone beyond Sam, Dean and Ellie. Still, I would have like to
see her confront Dean with the news that his dad and Jo had just tried to drug her. At least
I would have wanted her to meet with John on an equal basis. I think that would also have
been a challenge worthy of her intelligence and years of study. (Ops...almost forgot you
are the one telling the story.)
I did like the "sudden shadows in his eyes" and the shared (and growing) sense of
vulnerability they are experiencing, that she finds her own voice; and especially "Maybe its
about taking care of each other...like a family." Oh, but what kind of family, Charlotte?
The conversation between Sam and John was strained - as it should be. How can a father
and son remain at odds with so much at stake? You do a great job portraying that friction.
Okay...what's next? Oh yeah, more sex with Dean and Charlotte and drooling. What's
with the drooling?
I have a feeling I should go back and re-read the mythology discussion a few times to make
sure I understand it. Maybe I should dig out my copy of Illusions, too. Yes, I read it. Did
It seems we are going to have to wait for John's fellow hunters to assemble for the next big
development. So where does that leave us? Right...more sex with Dean and Charlotte,
except this time she isn't "Charlie" anymore. She's "Charlotte." What a nice way to end