Reviews for Morton Loses His Voice
Anonymous Girl Gamer chapter 1 . 8/14/2017
Really interesting!
Mega Buizel Ex chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
I love your fictions! I was reading long before I had an account, but now that I do, I can express my love for them!
The Orange Rockruff chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
That was kinda cute, and really good. Who would've guessed Roy dreamed like that? And bowser...Winning?! And, wait. Isn't peach juniors mom? Ain't that said in sunshine? Am I missing something here?! (Sweatdrops) anyway, 9/10.
Lady Luna chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Could you write one about Roy's dreams?
sunshineg9 chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
Amazing. I love the deveopment and the plot. Just perfect. :)
austin.todd.315 chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Roy and Ludwig are the only ones physically stronger than Roy... but great story! great Story! This was pretty funny, although I don't see how Bowser would just snap open from dreaming about defeat at the hands of the Mario Brothers, after all, he ALWAYS loses! To the Mario Brothers, that is. Anyway, this was very funny!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
BAHAHAHAHA nuff said.
Just Call Me J chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Very funny. Also very touching. I'm also glad that I'm not the only one who thinks of Roy like that.
arianapa1216 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
LOL This is funny! :)
Michael Lockheart chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
This is strangely touching.

Good job.
CosmicKitten89 chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Very cute and interesting. I like how Ludwig explained how being temporarily deaf made him discover his love for inventing, and the end where Morton yaks about the breeding section of the encyclopedia is funny too :)
The Caramel Koopa chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Very nice work - I love how you kept everyone so in-character. Written well, too. :)
2012001 chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
I like how he runs around with curse words written on the whiteboard, and how he'd tell his siblings al about the breeding section XD
netbreaker0 chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Aw how sweet. I didn't know Roy had such a big heart. Sometimes this koopa family isn't so dysfunctinal.
GodOfWurstwasser chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Let's have a look here at your first Mario fiction. I think it is obvious that this was your first, I can't really put my finger on it, but the overall style seems more raw, and less developed than in your later stories.

I liked the idea of Ludwig being deaf at one time, but I didn't like how he explained it. But that's just me, I don't like it when things are explained in stories, as the really clever reference to good ol' Ludwig van Beethoven, and love it when questions arise.

Also, there isn't much happening in this one, it is just some everyday situation in the life of the Koopalings more or less. It is something that would fit as a good episode of a kids show/cartoon, and seen as something like this, it is very good.
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