|Reviews for Impetuosity|
| Slight Kitty chapter 1 . 9/14
That was quite funny. I was confused why he "caught pink" (Sakura? Tenten has a dye job?) for a half-second before I remembered Tenten's genin outfit.
The first line is really excellent and clear. The not-quite-breakout was amusing. It was confusing that you switched into the guards' thoughts for a few paragraphs.
| Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
| Sasuke4Tenten chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
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| lily on coffee chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
you did a good job, it's a cut story
| Dudly chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Sasuke needed some Tenten.
Purfect opening line. n_n It was short and darling. I liked it.
| yuki-chanx chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
yay! sasuten! o
really cute fic.
| nothingness chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
checked the rest of your sasuten fics so far i think i need 2 more and the two i currently read are so cute even if there short...why must everything be a chapter(no answer needed i'm kool)still, i guess if it's your style and it helps create sasuten fics damn i'm down with it. so be it and to the next sasuten!...though i feel there wasn't alot of tenten in this fic just brief mentionings of her, but never did she talk, still sasuke's character was intact and not to OOC. still sweet fic...the bunny it's so cute and it will surely dominate the world. i'm gonna start pasting this thing everywhere like crazy
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| Tsuki no Okami chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
| runjumpfly07 chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
| Yugao chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Nice work... but poor, poor li'l Sasuke is too desperate. Haha... but what if whoever - or whatever, for that matter - he caught wasn't Tenten? Aww...
In any case, nice job.
| Kiri chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
but the "Sasuke reached his arms out…and caught pink." kinda had me thinking that it was Sakura instead of Tenten (considering Sakura's hair color IS pink) and whenever i think of pink and Naruto, the general conclusion is Sakura, even thou Tenten wears a pink vest, it isn't dominate of Sakura's brightly PINK hair ;
| Briar Noir chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Goddamn. That's cute. *smiles*
| naash chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
lol...that was great too.
ps- do more sasuten's i rather love it
| sasukes girl chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
that was so cute! u wrote a really in character sasuske!
| i.don'tMiSS chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
that was wonderful! Hope you make more!