|Reviews for Ojamajo Doremi MottoEvil Pop?|
| RoseQuartz1 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
It's pretty good, but pop isn't really evil. She doesn't act just has a black outfit. Does that really make her evil?
| Tabby Kattene chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
This is a pretty good story- I really enjoy it. However, the section for "Magical DoReMi" is for the 4kids dub, the "Ojamajo Doremi" section is completely different. Maybe you should move this story there!
| Ao Kudo chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
| Miyako-chanX3 chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
lol "i can't belive it i'm evil" lol plz write more btw there's an Ojamajo Doremi section on fanfiction incase you didn't know
| Evil Riggs chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Ow. This is really hard to read, man. Some simple steps to make it more enjoyable:
-Hit the Space bar between each sentence
-Divide up dialogue into paragraphs, so a new speaker starts a new paragraph
-Break into paragraphs by different ideas or themes
-Remove the DON'T STEAL author's notes; we all have original characters, and if we placed tags like that on every one of them, things would get very cluttered indeed
-Insert a breakdancing walrus named Carl
Heed these - ESPECIALLY that last one - and you might just have something here.