Reviews for Ojamajo Doremi MottoEvil Pop?
RoseQuartz1 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
It's pretty good, but pop isn't really evil. She doesn't act just has a black outfit. Does that really make her evil?
LoveLoveLovix chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
This is a pretty good story- I really enjoy it. However, the section for "Magical DoReMi" is for the 4kids dub, the "Ojamajo Doremi" section is completely different. Maybe you should move this story there!
Ao Kudo chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Miyako-chanX3 chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
lol "i can't belive it i'm evil" lol plz write more btw there's an Ojamajo Doremi section on fanfiction incase you didn't know
Evil Riggs chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Ow. This is really hard to read, man. Some simple steps to make it more enjoyable:

-Hit the Space bar between each sentence

-Divide up dialogue into paragraphs, so a new speaker starts a new paragraph

-Break into paragraphs by different ideas or themes

-Remove the DON'T STEAL author's notes; we all have original characters, and if we placed tags like that on every one of them, things would get very cluttered indeed

-Insert a breakdancing walrus named Carl

Heed these - ESPECIALLY that last one - and you might just have something here.