Reviews for As I Fall
DomesticatedWerewolves chapter 5 . 3/5/2007
Okay, bakura is adorable...but i doubt heroine addicts are...unless there like...fuzzy teddybears.

Bakura: Are you calling me a teadybear on heroine?

(smirks at mental image) No, but that WOULD be amusing. Oh and ineed someone to beat the stuffing out of (whips out pan) The easiest way i can think of to get you off heroine. everytime you...shoot youself -_-', i will beat you inot oblivion...

Bakura: Pfft, yeah right (tries to do it)

(BASHES his head in (note the capitals) NO! BAD BAKURA!

Bakura: (sways then passes out)

(Holds pan over shoulder) No more heroine for you.
UnderFingerAndThumb chapter 4 . 2/25/2007
Okay Hi, yeah, I'm alone.

Okay um, sorry I didnt review last chapter, but I did totally read it. The box wouldn't pop up.

Anyways, its quite hard to type right now, see, i fell on black ice on a hill and went sliding down it, grabbed the concrete to try to stop myself.. my hand and knee is all torn up and stuff and it hurts, and yeh. theres no skin on the top of my ring finger on my right hand, and the nail is split right down the center. So yeah.

Anyways... *squee* KuraJouSmex! *pounces Bakura and bites him on the neck* ILOVEYOUSOMUCH! Marry me? I know I know, you're gay.. but please? I love you! And.. hey, I'm gay too! We have something in common. Cept you're into guys, and I'm into girls.

We'd make a perfect couple, me, doing anything and everything you say, bending to your will, bowing down.. you.. being hot.. and awesome.. and evil.. with a male harem.
cajun-beauty chapter 4 . 2/24/2007
Poor confused ! Mai-ness...Bakura is screwed up in the head...
pennypigeon chapter 4 . 2/20/2007
love it
Silver Mirror chapter 4 . 2/20/2007
Awsome chapter! Sorry it took me so long to review! Work has been nuts and both my mum & sis are sick, with this horrible flu. Even my own update is short and it sucks! Anywho, I really hope you update soon! Take care!
xxx.Jenn.xxx chapter 4 . 2/19/2007
Teh Ferris Thing! -ish slapped- Ow. D I know, I know. I was a terrible, horrible person. What can I say? -grumbles quietly-

O! -jumps about- That must be so much fun! Yes, I must admit, I find it quite hilarious. xD They're so cute and fuzzy. -pats- It'll be ok. Although... -eyes glaze over- Those were fairly interesting scenes. Very well-written though, I have to admit. Not like some of the other stuff I've read... -shudders- I'm proud of you, Ferris Thing! -tackles- And furthermore, Mai is odd. But I like how you got her character captured so well...

Oh no, don't worry about it. It's really ok. -wrinkles nose- I took forever to reply. I'm such a fruitcake. But at least now I'm back, and hopefully I'll keep on replying relatively quickly! As long as you keep on updating. ;] How far ahead are you, if you are indeed ahead at all?
Sagira98 chapter 4 . 2/18/2007
I agree the bishops are bastards. Ah well a whole wek off from school cause of snow is always good. You're really screwing Jou up aren't you? What happened to Malik and Marik? I feel bad for Mai. She's losing her unofficial boyfriend to a psychotic murder with a heroin addiction. That's got to hurt.
Sporky- queen of the sand chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
*twitch* must... kill... Mai... getting... in... the... way... must... kill... *blinks and looks around* er... hi! uh, I mean... actually I don't know what I mean right now... .; keep up the good work!
nayades18 chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
yess,yeess! I can't put in words how much I enjoyed this chapter(how frustrating!)

very dark,intense and hot!(i want more!)

the relationship between baku and joey is so rough and obscure!i love it!

and i like how you put mai in this fic

i cant wait for the next chapter!
Isolationist chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
It seems that Bakura's plan worked afterall. His tactic reminds me of Minkah. lol But I never thought that Jounouchi's previous girlfriend was Mai. Although it was obvious, Mai just didn't cross my mind for some reason. Some surprise for me. Instead of Mai and Bakura clashing for Jou's love, I'm predicting that Jou is just going to tell Mai off and leave him alone. But I'm not too sure if Mai is willing to let him go so easily. Oh wellz. Now to find out Bakura's old past lover. I'm betting one dollar its Malik! .

Sorry to hear about your sister. I hope she gets better. (
MarshmallowPeepGod chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
Hi. Ok, so yeah. Um, Jou has issues...and Bakura too. They're all messed up. Mai's a bitch right now. And Kana's ditching me to go on a cruise!Oh well. Happy late valentines day!
hmmmmmmmmm chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
Yay! I get the almost!rape chappie dedicated to me! Mine, mine, my own..my precious...-grabs it and runs away from Tenne and reetard-

"-sque!- Wherefrom Where from? Where from?" O.O So -that's- how I look like when I get all exicted. No wonder my f(r)iends think I'm scary. Calm down, take a deep breath...uhh...think of a baket of roses or something. Oh. Wait. That won't work. Think of all teh lovely reviews you get! :D I'm from...Hey! Hey! Let's play hangman! It starts with a...-gets hit- Fine. No hangman. I'm from Romania. And in case you're wondering, it's driving me insane x.O

Review time!

" “That...should help,” I manage weakly." W00t! Jou to the rescue! He saved the fangirl comunity from disaster! We can still drool over 'Kura-kins! Yay!

"It’s all intoxicating." Hmm...intereting how he feels sick because he just drugged 'Kura and then makes himself feel better by using his own type of "drug". -glances at Jou- Hypocrite.

Mai. You left Malik and Marik out of the chapter for Mai? I'm not saying that I don't like her (because I do, she's one of my favourite female characters on the show) but...I want them in Domino dammit!

“Let’s abandon our current course for Kyoto,” I order airily taking another sip of champagne.

“Domino City it is, miss.” XD Lovely. It's nice to know that she's finaly found an assistant/butler/slave that knows how to serve her.

"This is going to be interesting..." -looks at 'Kura- Are you kidding? Of course it's going to be interesting! Too bad Ferris couldn't give all the...details -shifty eyes- What? I'm a teenager! I've got hormones!...Not as many as you and Jou, but...-notices 'Kura's knife- O.O I'll...shut up now.

I love you for writing that almost!rape begining scene. I love you even more for dedicating this chapter to me -starry eyes- I finally get the reward I deserve! I'm appreciated at my true value! I'm..-bricked- Never mind.

" “No!” I shout wriggling again helplessly, his fingers digging into my wrists preventing my escape." -hiss- Stop struggling! It's useless! Teh Ferris controls you!

"My eyes widen in shock at the electrifying currents coursing through me, mouth opening in a moan as my body arches like a bow in reaction to what his fingers are doing to me beneath the material." See? She's in control.

"That was...shit...that was incredible." Is he talknig about 'Kura or the little -qouting 'Kura- fuck (Because I don't talk like that...no...not at all -inocent whistle-)-end quote- they shared?

"I’m not gay and I’ve never yearned to know what they do collectively. Look at what I’ve been missing out on!" He's finally come to terms with it Ferris. -nod nod- Now he knows there's no escape.

"Of course, one doesn’t usually speculate on their psychopathic murdering adversary’s sexual preferences." Actually, I would. o.O

"He wasn’t gentle with me, that’s for sure." -laughs- Oh, the poor thing, He actually expected him to be gentle and loving?

"Odd. I was positive the kid’s straight. Isn’t he always trailing that gargantuan-breasted bitch? Yes. I’m sure of that. Hmm...a masochist perhaps?" That would be you, beloved tomb raider -cough- Lara Croft -cough-. If memeory seves me right, weren't you the one to stab your arm? And jump in front of Mar(l)ik?

"The next thing I know I’m dashing to the side door and out of the house, taking off down the block as fast as my legs will allow." No! NO! Get your ass back there and finish what oyou started! Or let 'Kura finish what you started! Ferris! Make him go back!

"respect from hundreds of thousands of adoring fans...how could they pass all that up?" I guess she never met the fandom, did she?

"Time for another visit; not one with prospects of me becoming too attached, but a reminder to him that I am the sole romantic obsession in his life." I guess 'Kura found another sadist to help him drive Jou insane. Lovely!

"I’m not gay. I’m not gay. I’m not gay." Uhuh. Keep telling yourself that and maybe it'll become true.

"I’m not gay. I’m not gay. I’m not gay." Nope. Still not true.

"It’s been so long since I’ve seen my puppy!” " -hiss- He's -Kura's- in this fic so back off!

" “Y-you didn’t have to do that,” I manage though inside I’m pleased. She did that just for me?" She's lying! Lying! Don't believe her! Go back to the other sadist!

"Perhaps she has a new perspective of things..." And I'm the Sennen Ring.

"Or not." Duh.

-starry eyes again- Oh! I absolutley love it! And it's dedicated to me! Me! ME! -burries it so Tenne and reetard can't get it- MINE!

also, I'm currently reading CotW at a slow pace so I can actually -remember- what's going on (I have this habbit of reading things as fast as posible and then forgeting everything that was in them x.X)

oh! And I almost forgot: Happy belated B-day!
dragonlady222 chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
Good chapter. Poor Jou he is so confused. I hope he can get himslef right and figure out what he wants.
HieiWannabe chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
Gah. I don't know whether to be glad that it wasn't Bakura this time, or just upset that it happened at all. Well, anyway. I'm not sure I like your Mai in this fic. She seems more manipulative than haughty. Although, since that's possibly denial, I won't complain too much; yet, anyway.

I liked how you had Jou get Kura's drugs for him. It ticks me off no end when I read stories where people insist on making addicts go cold turkey, esp when they're already in rough shape. That is not the way to do it! I'm not sure about heroin, but some types of withdrawal can be fatal. Alcohol's DTs, for example.

What you said before about being allergic to codeine, and presumably other morphine derivatives; have you considered hypnosis? It's used in cases like that. It's just difficult because you have to have several sessions with the hypnotist before you can be put under that far, and they do a dry run of the operation to make sure it lasts long enough. But it does work; people have had open heart surgery with nothing but hypnosis for pain control.
Rogue1979 chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
Wow...that was...wow! I don't think I've ever read such hawt stuff from you! I mean...I know you usually rate your stuff M, but there's never been such sexual content! Bravo!

I wonder what Mai's appearance has to offer the situation. Looking forward to finding out! Update soon.
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