|Reviews for As I Fall|
| nayades18 chapter 5 . 3/7/2007
wonderful job! I think that I especially enjoyed this chapter(mostly the last part)
bakura is so depressed and hopeless...you really can transmit the emotion
poor joey !what a dramatic life!
great interaction between him and bakura ,i cant wait for more!
(where is malik?)
| dragonlady222 chapter 5 . 3/6/2007
Good luck on your other stories and I hope your rat is okay.
I really hope Jou and Bakura can work together and get him through withdrawal.
I really like this. Tell Bakura not to be so negative he should just enjoy the free sex he's getting and enjoying. Jou should start using his brain more often and get away from Mai and enjoy Bakura.
| Muchacha chapter 5 . 3/5/2007
Yay, indications of a little, tiny, minute friendship going on... that will evolve into something more and smack that bitch Mai upside the head!
| HieiWannabe chapter 5 . 3/5/2007
When I read your response to me I was like, Huh? So, I reread my review and realized that I must've been sicker than I thought when I wrote that, because it made so little sense. What I was trying to say was, since you're allergic to whatever painkiller it was, you might want to consider being hypnotized instead of taking the drug. Hypnosis is often used in cases where surgery is necessary, but sedatives are contraindicated for whatever reason. It works by splitting your conscious mind off from the part of your mind that pays attention to pain, so that you're aware of everything that's happening to you but you don't feel it and aren't bothered by it.
As for using it to cure allergies, I have no idea. That probably wouldn't work. Like I said above, hypnosis temporarily splits your mind into pieces, so it probably wouldn't have any effect on something that will happen after it's over. On the other hand, it does work on smoking and drinking and such, but only temporarily. It turns out that people are only responding to the person who hypnotizes them in those cases, just like any other therapy used to treat addiction, and when that fades, they go right back.
Well, this is one way to get another review out of someone; misunderstand them. But since I'd feel guilty if I didn't give you some feedback about the story, I'd like to say I approved of the way you handled the reciprocity in this chapter. Even nasty people feel obligated to return a favor, even if it's one they didn't want and tried to refuse.
| DomesticatedWerewolves chapter 5 . 3/5/2007
Okay, bakura is adorable...but i doubt heroine addicts are...unless there like...fuzzy teddybears.
Bakura: Are you calling me a teadybear on heroine?
(smirks at mental image) No, but that WOULD be amusing. Oh and ineed someone to beat the stuffing out of (whips out pan) The easiest way i can think of to get you off heroine. everytime you...shoot youself -_-', i will beat you inot oblivion...
Bakura: Pfft, yeah right (tries to do it)
(BASHES his head in (note the capitals) NO! BAD BAKURA!
Bakura: (sways then passes out)
(Holds pan over shoulder) No more heroine for you.
| UnderFingerAndThumb chapter 4 . 2/25/2007
Okay Hi, yeah, I'm alone.
Okay um, sorry I didnt review last chapter, but I did totally read it. The box wouldn't pop up.
Anyways, its quite hard to type right now, see, i fell on black ice on a hill and went sliding down it, grabbed the concrete to try to stop myself.. my hand and knee is all torn up and stuff and it hurts, and yeh. theres no skin on the top of my ring finger on my right hand, and the nail is split right down the center. So yeah.
Anyways... *squee* KuraJouSmex! *pounces Bakura and bites him on the neck* ILOVEYOUSOMUCH! Marry me? I know I know, you're gay.. but please? I love you! And.. hey, I'm gay too! We have something in common. Cept you're into guys, and I'm into girls.
We'd make a perfect couple, me, doing anything and everything you say, bending to your will, bowing down.. you.. being hot.. and awesome.. and evil.. with a male harem.
| cajun-beauty chapter 4 . 2/24/2007
Poor confused ! Mai-ness...Bakura is screwed up in the head...
| pennypigeon chapter 4 . 2/20/2007
| Silver Mirror chapter 4 . 2/20/2007
Awsome chapter! Sorry it took me so long to review! Work has been nuts and both my mum & sis are sick, with this horrible flu. Even my own update is short and it sucks! Anywho, I really hope you update soon! Take care!
| xxx.Jenn.xxx chapter 4 . 2/19/2007
Teh Ferris Thing! -ish slapped- Ow. D I know, I know. I was a terrible, horrible person. What can I say? -grumbles quietly-
O! -jumps about- That must be so much fun! Yes, I must admit, I find it quite hilarious. xD They're so cute and fuzzy. -pats- It'll be ok. Although... -eyes glaze over- Those were fairly interesting scenes. Very well-written though, I have to admit. Not like some of the other stuff I've read... -shudders- I'm proud of you, Ferris Thing! -tackles- And furthermore, Mai is odd. But I like how you got her character captured so well...
Oh no, don't worry about it. It's really ok. -wrinkles nose- I took forever to reply. I'm such a fruitcake. But at least now I'm back, and hopefully I'll keep on replying relatively quickly! As long as you keep on updating. ;] How far ahead are you, if you are indeed ahead at all?
| Sagira98 chapter 4 . 2/18/2007
I agree the bishops are bastards. Ah well a whole wek off from school cause of snow is always good. You're really screwing Jou up aren't you? What happened to Malik and Marik? I feel bad for Mai. She's losing her unofficial boyfriend to a psychotic murder with a heroin addiction. That's got to hurt.
| Sporky- queen of the sand chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
*twitch* must... kill... Mai... getting... in... the... way... must... kill... *blinks and looks around* er... hi! uh, I mean... actually I don't know what I mean right now... .; keep up the good work!
| nayades18 chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
yess,yeess! I can't put in words how much I enjoyed this chapter(how frustrating!)
very dark,intense and hot!(i want more!)
the relationship between baku and joey is so rough and obscure!i love it!
and i like how you put mai in this fic
i cant wait for the next chapter!
| Isolationist chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
It seems that Bakura's plan worked afterall. His tactic reminds me of Minkah. lol But I never thought that Jounouchi's previous girlfriend was Mai. Although it was obvious, Mai just didn't cross my mind for some reason. Some surprise for me. Instead of Mai and Bakura clashing for Jou's love, I'm predicting that Jou is just going to tell Mai off and leave him alone. But I'm not too sure if Mai is willing to let him go so easily. Oh wellz. Now to find out Bakura's old past lover. I'm betting one dollar its Malik! .
Sorry to hear about your sister. I hope she gets better. (
| MarshmallowPeepGod chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
Hi. Ok, so yeah. Um, Jou has issues...and Bakura too. They're all messed up. Mai's a bitch right now. And Kana's ditching me to go on a cruise!Oh well. Happy late valentines day!