|Reviews for Eclipse|
| Lakitalover chapter 28 . 3/6
*sobs* This story is even more heartbreaking upon a second reading, knowing what's coming in the next few chapters.
| Shortyjordy52 chapter 31 . 2/18
It's really sad, but this has got to be my favorite story I've read on this website. The ending of this book is brilliantly tragic and it had me gasping in shock. LOVE IT
| S chapter 2 . 2/17
I love Iron too.
| S chapter 1 . 2/17
Nice so far ... I don't see how Katara couldn't sense any water in his room though.
Zuko was good.
| Shortyjordy52 chapter 3 . 2/15
I know the story is complete, and me here on chapter 3, I've already fallen in love with this story!
| WriterCluelessThe chapter 9 . 1/16
Sokka is so infuriating! Canon-wise he was one of the first people to accept Zuko, and now I feel like he's acting out of turn and a bit ooc. Im hoping I'll see some zukoxsokka bromance action later ;) hehe
Love this fic btw! Very well written and it keeps me intrigued the entire time.
| TigerStriper chapter 30 . 11/10/2013
Did you... just kill Toph? I've had a lot of minor issues with the story, most could be chalked up to the fact that this was written before the series ended and your decision to include babies, but really? out of all the characters you could have voted off, why Toph? That's like killing god for Pete's sake
| bibsa1 chapter 30 . 7/29/2013
Killing Toph was bad enough, but Aang too? I can't keep reading this. It's a shame cause I was really enjoying it and looking forward to the sequel. It's rare to find a great story, with multiple chapters, well-written characters, and that's completed too. I knew it was too good to be true. I just can't bring myself to keep reading now.
| TheGreenQuill chapter 31 . 6/27/2013
HOLY FUGGING SHYTT...I did NOT see that coming.
Just when I thought Zuko would sacrifice himself for his friends, he give in to Azula and kills Aang. :'''(
I DONT BELIEVE IT.
I hate the ending- HATE IT- but I cant deny that I wanna see what happens next.
Gonna start Varedha ASAP.
| engineergirl86 chapter 31 . 6/17/2013
on my way right now. thanks for this awesome fanfic!
| engineergirl86 chapter 30 . 6/17/2013
Oh my gosh sooooo epic! Gah, too good for words. I don't even know what to say the fighting scenes were epic. At the first of this chapter i was uber pissed at Zuko, i thought he was going to be wimpy or something and try to whine his way out of the deal in a very OOC way. But this was so real and well written and full of emotion that it made the character deaths worth it. Poor Toph I was feelin the angst and then she dies, and I was like wow she was really a tragic hero here. and Sokka so well written just wow, wow. Katara was great in this chapter too! But your crowning a achievement was Zuko, It was just outstanding. As I have said in previous reviews he is very in character. And I think if this had really happened in the series (and it wasn't a childrens show) and zutara had happened he would have made the exact same choice. Just outstanding. Bravo. Azuala was awesome too. I'm sorry I just nerded out on you but dang. this is potentially the best chapter of any fanfic I have ever read.
| engineergirl86 chapter 26 . 6/15/2013
This story is amazing and Zuko is in character! It's fantastic. Sooooo many fanfic writers screw it up. I just love where the story is going and the Oma and Shu thing. I called it a few chaps back but I didn't take the time to comment because I just had to keep reading. You are fantastic.
| engineergirl86 chapter 23 . 6/15/2013
| Blck Doves chapter 30 . 6/14/2013
| engineergirl86 chapter 18 . 6/13/2013
WOW! I never liked sukka before. But you made it so beautiful. It was terribly plain and unromantic in the series. I hate relationships that are just like, "oh well its convenient for us to be together so uh sure" which is kinda what theirs felt like in the series. It was shallow (not as shallow as horrible awful maiko though) but you gave it depth and romance and I love it. Bravo. I also loved the zutara moment. Zuko's angst in this chap was great