Reviews for Before Battle
I-Am-Zemyx chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
I absolutely loved it! This was so... Wonderful!
Rainshade chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Humanizing the heartless was a great idea, and you carried it off perfectly. I really enjoyed reading this.
Pumpkin Head Jones chapter 1 . 3/26/2009 pretty, and so sad. So few people could make something so poetic out of that joke of a level
Sorehai chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
AH! I thought this looked familiar. I found this through various links on Live Journal.

I think you took a very original idea, while incorportaing elements that most players wouldn't think about. I love how 241 keeps reminding himself, what he can do, and why he has to do it. The calm before the storm with the heartless all gathered, comical in a dark way.

What really won me over was the concept of honor. He was honored to be there. Even if there were others almost like him...

A very good read.