|Reviews for Origins of Humanity|
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/16/2022
Instead of the chapter 23 guide,you could've just finished the battle.
| kirosyamcha chapter 17 . 11/9/2021
Hmm the whole colonials removing the symbionts thing from tealc.. they don’t need to remove the symbiotic from him, taking it out isn’t the issue, reactivating his immune system is the issue.
| Darth Gumby chapter 9 . 4/13/2021
You're writing the SGC as fairly naive. SG-1 got themselves out of that mess, by themselves in relatively short order. it took them a day or two and they didn't have to blow anything up to do it. The Colonials coming along and magically interfacing actually took longer than SG-1 by themselves.
Jack, Carter and Hammond would know the Colonials were potentially FAR more powerful than the SGC and would immediately recognize that the Colonies were going to attempt to use them as a vassal state. Earth would negotiate with the Colonies, but would not allow them to dictate terms. Earth also recognizes that their only real leverage is control of the Stargate and knowledge of the true location of Kobol...but both of those things are temporary. This early on in the series, Earth would benefit immensely from a few Raptors and a cargo ship or two. It would fundamentally shift things and could easily transform many of the SGC's early failures into victories.
Earth could buy a few surplus hulls and add technologies along the way that greatly upgraded them.
Think about it, the engines alone would jump start the early 2000s to realize the dream of harvesting resources from our asteroid belt. Earth wouldn't be limited to ships small enough to land in covert hangers at Area 51.
What the US should do (because real life isn't a fictional utopia) is colonize some planets and establish a foothold in the galaxy before the secret of the Gate gets out and the rest of the planet is clamoring for access to the best tech and the choicest worlds to establish their own colonies. . Even Civilian level Colonial tech gives them a massive edge over every other nation on Earth in this regard. The US should pull a China and buy up asteroid mining technology, Colonial FTL and Artificial gravity and develop some fallback colonies with Agriculture and Heavy Industry to exploit their edge.
| Darth Gumby chapter 8 . 4/13/2021
The Colonials asked the impossible. They walked into an absolute shit show of global powers competing for subjugation of the planet...and without the slightest understanding of ANY of it...dictated terms that the SGC had to inform all the other governments what they were up to...and then hand over all their hard fought technology to them FOR FREE and then to add insult to injury, give up control of the program entirely to an "International Oversight Committee" that would almost certainly be wildly corrupt, ineffective at administering the program and incapable of defending the planet.
Hammond (and by extension the POTUS) should have told the Colonials NO and simply explained that while the US shared their ideals of global unity... the reality was FAR from doable.
No sane government would ever actually concede to such demands.
| jedijeff chapter 23 . 5/31/2020
I was reading your plan and remembered an episode from season 4 second episode where the team Gates to an advanced world that's in the middle of a war. I love the episode because it stars one of my favorite actors René Auberjonois. They use a remote control fighter to fight their enemies. Maybe this is something that you or whoever is taking over the story can use.
| Guest chapter 23 . 6/5/2019
This was one I thought out and well excuted.
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/5/2019
Why not 10000 or 15000 light yrs?if the 13th tribe left kobol they would've had light speed ships at best and would've taken 1000s of yrs to get to earth.
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/5/2019
Look at what happened with the Rossum corporation at the end,the tech they had devastated the whole planet.
| monbade chapter 23 . 2/15/2019
well this sucks. was just getting good
| Andrei chapter 1 . 2/7/2019
There are stories in here that definitely deserve to be finished.
Unfortunately for us the readers this one doesn't deserve to be even started, it's utter junk.
| M.A.N chapter 1 . 12/21/2018
Next time in...
The battle for the humanity
Anubis launched the attack on earth while other System Lord focused their attack on colonials planets.
The Earth's Prometheus and Daedalus scrambled to save the humanity from enslavement and extinction, spearheaded by Prometheus herself and SG-1 to repel Anubis fleets and save their "comrades" colonials...
And from the shadow, the cylons come for backstabbed any exhausted side of the war but failed to realized the difference off colonials and goa'ulds computer system and get exterminated by the goa'ulds.
| tylermech66 chapter 8 . 11/30/2018
earth super!scientists will hopefully constantly surprise the colonials. I can totally see Sam and Gaius butting heads about naquada theory.
| tylermech66 chapter 5 . 11/28/2018
| tylermech66 chapter 4 . 11/28/2018
that last bit with the colonials made me laugh for a good minute, hah!
| tylermech66 chapter 2 . 11/28/2018
ooft. I like the story but it is a bit too wall of text for me, break up your paragraphs into actual, you know, paragraphs and it'll be a magnitude easier to read.