|Reviews for Quest to be the Greatest|
| UzumakiNaruto chapter 12 . 7/26
Like ur story,
Mind if I try to beta it too? Plz 'advertise' the fic I'm going to write
I can't help with the plot, but I will happily do grammar and the like
| Narut0Uzumaki chapter 38 . 7/26
PLZ HURRY UP!
BTW, i'm thinkin' of writing my own story inspired by the fanfic god named kenchi, and you. Can't think of a name yet.
| Narut0Uzumaki chapter 3 . 7/26
Perfect. Just perfect
This is the best fanfic I have every read, and i have been reading fanfiction for over two years
I beg of you, PLEASE continue your amazing work on this.
I would pay for this if i could
You can punch me... You can kick me... Oh what the hell, you can even kill me. But if you lay even a finger on one of my friends... if you lay a finger on one of my NAKAMA...
I'LL KILL YOU- Monkey D. Luffy/ Mugiwara no luffy
| Squarekiddo chapter 1 . 5/11
Naruto is to young, dosnt fit, why would you have Naruto at age 12 when Luffy is alot older?
| Tiggx42 chapter 38 . 10/23/2015
Weren't you supposed to continue legacy of the rasengan. What happened?
| Hypothetical Spiritual Entity chapter 38 . 9/6/2015
I like the story so far. I especially like how you've integrated the ninja world into the pirate one: It preserves an air of mystery about the ninjas without making it feel like a full-isolation situation. I imagine they were pretty much like the samurai of Wano country (famous, but an uncommon sight unless you have business with them) prior to the all-villages-effed-up incident.
I'm also enjoying the breaks from canon. Hopefully, we'll get a few more pirate vs ninja battles, maybe even an arc with ninjas as the main villains. (I'm particularly curious whether we'll get to see Amegakure, or wherever Hanzo's built his ninja-pirate-harbor.)
I also wonder about the power levels of characters. If everything was unchanged, I'd say a kage would be a bit weaker than an admiral (When Fujitora summons a meteor, nobody bats an eye. When Madara drops a meteor, all the kages go "Holy shit, WTF!"). But you've shown with Chouji that you're not against the notion of mixing OP and Naruto powers in a character, which leads me to suspect that you have plans for how the stronger ninja fight. I'm guessing there'd be a plethora of anti-Devil Fruit tactics and tricks (Suiton in particular looks like it'd count as cheating in such a battle, had there been rules). And that's discounting haki, which everyone and their uncle seems to have in the New World.
Anyway, I look forward to more.
| MotherOfGrammar chapter 38 . 5/2/2015
I've been meaning to review this story for quite some time now. Please excuse my rudeness for not leaving a review earlier. In an attempt to keep this short (unlike my last review on your Clash story) this story has been well crafted and it deserves any of the positive feedback it receives. You've clearly put a lot of thought into how the Naruto and One piece worlds would interact with one another, and the changes brought about by the inclusion of ninjas fit oh so perfectly in Oda's creation. Naruto and One Piece are two of my favorite series, and I'm glad to see them crossed over so well here. The characters are written true to their forms, and the way the Naruto characters and the One Piece characters speak to each other just feels like an accurate depiction of conversations they would have. In fact, it seems like it practically writes itself. Considering One Piece is an incredibly long tale that is still ongoing, I commend you for making it this far in the series, and kudos to you if you plan to take the story through the whole tale. Keep up the hard work and dedication to your stories!
| Baron von Nobody chapter 38 . 4/25/2015
UGH! THAT WAS SO GOOD!
We are finally getting to the good parts! This is going to be so awesome!
I understand that Life is indeed important, and demands your undivided attention... as such, write whenever you feel like it... However, I will also say, it feels good getting this update, because I was beginning to fear you were about to call it quits on this... I"m glad my fears were unfounded...
Welp... looks like Shino has the first victory... unless you want to count Shikamaru and Sakura beating Hanabi... or... Orochimaru beating Naruto... Eh... I'll just count Shino's as first Strawhat battle victory...
And Yay! Naruto meets Hinata! Everything is right in the world...
Alright... I will say, there were some errors, which I will look back on and PM you where they might be... but other than that... this was good... and I am looking forward to more... hope to catch you on the flipside...
| bloodshound chapter 38 . 4/24/2015
Naruto and Luffy are so stupid it hurts to read this. It's a pity i can't read these in fast forward the way i watched the animes. though this compared to canon, at least yours doesn't take five ephs to get to the big fight scene. Seriously, it's a toss up between Naruto, One Piece and DBZ as to which took longest to get to the point.
| giodan chapter 38 . 4/22/2015
good to see this is still up!
| Emma Iveli chapter 38 . 4/22/2015
You updaded! I'm really glad you did... I'm having a really sucky day, but this is my favroite fanfic so at least that's one bright spot...
| Anime Insaniac chapter 37 . 4/19/2015
I can give you a very distinct thought process about who would be where as far as certain characters.
We all know where Gaara and most likely, the most prominent, if not all members, of Sunagakure will be. That is pretty much an obvious setup. The weird thing is that Gaara's weakness is the exact same as Crocodile's. Also, would Gaara participate in the rebellion just to kill strong foes, or would his reason's be different? Without the villages, Gaara, for the most part, should be more accepted because they need strong people to help them.
Since the introduction of Orochimaru, that means that Jiraiya has to be introduced as well. This would probably get Sanji to ask for an autograph. We all know that Sanji is a huge perv, so reading the novels that Jiraiya is most known for would not be surprising. Then there's the fact that with this setup would be Nami might add Jiraiya to the list for the idiot competition just because of how far he goes for 'research'.
There are a few things that Nami isn't taking into account with her 'Ultimate Idiot Competition', and 1st is the fact that there is an age difference between Luffy and Naruto. I understand that there is common sense for a lot of things, but the fact is that Naruto is 12 and hasn't had anyone to properly raise him. Ussop is somewhat in the same boat, but he had his mother until she died, and he at least had been taught some things, but he's still pretty gullible. Naruto has been alone for more that half his life, that's pretty shallow judgment for stupidity. Luffy had someone to raise him until he set out, Naruto has been on his own since he was 5, that's not enough to be able to comprehend much of right and wrong but he seems to be doing pretty well. Even moreso if you consider the fact that he's fairly smart with his money, he doesn't spend needlessly, this allowed him to save up enough to tempt Nami to steal from him, not many in the crew can say that. Speaking of which, that actually would be a good position for Naruto. If Naruto was in charge of the money, there wouldn't be any wasted spending, the worst would be him spending on Ramen, which is cheap regardless of the setup.
Actually, now that I think about it, there will always be a position for each member. Shino is the contact and main trainer. Shikamaru is the main tactician. Sasuke could actually be the survival officer, if the situation calls for it, he knows how to survive on the bare minimal without money available. Sakura, I'm not entirely sure, but she could be the medical assistant and back up doctor once Chopper joins and he could teach her a few things. Neji and Hinata could actually be very effective in helping Nami with monitoring weather patterns. Not only that, but given their status, they could help the other crew members with their attire, helping them to select clothing based on quality fabric so they would last longer and the ability to negotiate pricing. They can't have stayed at Konami Archipelago the whole time the villages had been gone, so they had to be able to haggle so they could survive. Chouji could probably help Sanji when it comes to finding quality ingredients and be the taste tester. As someone that Sanji has know for a while, his opinion is probably trusted by the cook. I'm not entirely sure whether or not you'll introduce someone in Loguetown, but if it was anyone, I would say Tenten. Mostly because of the fact that with the many weapons store, there are Blacksmiths and Tenten would probably be apprentice in one of them. There's also Daddy Masters, someone that she probably would challenge occasionally. I'll hold off on my rantings for a bit.
- Anime Insaniac
| legspert9 chapter 2 . 3/4/2015
Looks good so far. Let's see how this plays out.
| Derp chapter 37 . 9/23/2014
Why did you stop updating? It was getting good. Please don't stop updating.
| digifan303 chapter 37 . 4/1/2014
Fantastic chapter! Ill have to read the rest later.