|Reviews for To Dream|
| Nao K. Kawasaki chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Awesome concept. Planning a sequel? I think it'd be interesting...
| dragongirl2101 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
it was perfect! detailed without being overly so.
| Valkyrie Wilde chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
I really liked it! Maybe because it's a fantasy within a fantasy. Go Hermione for doing something for herself! Excellent writing!
| It'sawhisper chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Eh, it was alrught
| fallen faery chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
A sequel would be nice! Very cute story!
| OoverO chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
this is good!
the chapters are kindof long though
and like people get bored reading so much at once
like your eyes need a break
but thats it
theres nothing wrong with the story!
i love it! ;)
| Rutheart chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
I would love to see more chapters to this story...maybe Fred had placed a charm on that shelf, so that when she grabbed a daydream charm, it would be one that he had specifically changed for her. Maybe instead of a simple daydream charm, it caused her to move to the location in the "daydream", summoning Fred as well, and he decided to play the scene by ear, never guessing how far she would take it. She doesn't suspect that it was anything more than a daydream until she starts getting sick and reports to the infirmary. They finally figure out that she's pregnant, but she can't imagine how. She later discusses it with Ginny, saying how she can't possibly be pregnant because she's never "done anything more than just daydream about having sex". At that moment, her eyes narrow, having figured out what happened. A very angry Hermione hunts down Fred Weasley, intent on punishing him for misleading her.
I'm not so good at fleshing out plot ideas, so I would love to see you continue this story.
| CocoaCollidoscope chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
Oh damn, I want a Patented Daydream Charm.
| remuslives chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
wowza! that was something. whew! it's hot in here.
| Little Miss Bovver chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Loved it :D
| GreenGreenDress13 chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
Ohh I loved it. If you could find any inspiration and maybe make this one shot not so one shoty any more would be very amazing. No pressure though I deff will put you on author alert becasue your writing is very good. Great Job
| Chrystal Slara chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
very good, a little short but other wise good, well written, not confusing, no spelling or gramer mistakes that take away from the story, i enjoyed it
| aLiarSays chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
wow...just wow! that was amazkink! shame its just a oneshot *hint-hint*
| Chocolate Wolf chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
I really want to know what happens next. I love it.
| coconut13 chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
DAMN! Where can I get one of those things? :D