Reviews for Goku Awakens
Guest chapter 7 . 9/10
je veux voir la suite!
Spinatic chapter 7 . 5/28/2014
Do more! Please!
hey chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
tell us when and how and the reaction for when goku got his stomache
Guest chapter 7 . 1/8/2013
xxXDanniXxx chapter 7 . 8/14/2012
Loved the story! Very fun to read and the idea was great! I wish there were more chapters! Loved how goku could talk to nature! No other words are coming to my mind except that I loved it :)
Tamie123 chapter 6 . 3/28/2011
I forgot to tell you this but the correct spelling from the Japanese word of Great Sage is 'Seiten Taisei'.
Tamie123 chapter 7 . 3/28/2011
I like this story. Also if Goku's is still in his true form, but keeped his claws and pointy-ears. I am sure that the people in that town which I am assuming are humans would be frightened of him. Also news can spead very fast even if the entire a people in an entire village because even if they don't know what the murder looks like they could still do DNA tests to find some clues. Gojyo said that they are fine and tells Goku not to get upset about it. Not only did Goku kill the innkeeper, but he also killed everyone in the whole town. Gojyo words aren't that convience to make someone come down especially when a similar incident could occur again. People who pass by the ruin town or come to visit their relatives would find out just be doing DNA tests of who the murder was.
yang003 chapter 7 . 7/2/2009
I really like the story, I hope you write more:D
Kain Sinner chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
awesome story!
ElementalFoxGoddess chapter 7 . 2/7/2009
update update update please!
Idiots-Rule-The-World chapter 7 . 1/4/2009
please please write some more its really good and i really want to know what happens.

please please write some more,

Jamica chapter 7 . 4/5/2008
Nice story, I want to know what happens next
DarkSiren49 chapter 7 . 10/8/2007
Great story so fair please update soon its been to long...

Oh and one question is this story about Seiten Taisei and Son Goku?

Update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
InsaneGiggles chapter 7 . 5/30/2007
I love it please continue.
Imperial Empress Kirin chapter 7 . 5/26/2007
This is interesting, but I have to say it's not well-written. You have a good grasp of dialogue, however there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors. I suggest finding a beta or someone that's been writing for a long time and does well in it. I can see that you're doing better than you were before and that's good. Please don't write using symbols, I could see that you did that in the beginning of the story. I guess it's alright to use it in AN or the Summary, but don't use it while writing the actual story. Your summary is pretty off as well.

7th ! Okay, it's mainly about Goku and his powers. There will be little to no romance. This is my first one, and the first chapter is kinda boaring. But thats how it goes! So please review and tell me what you think, what I should approve. Thankyou!

You could have just put:

This story revolves around Goku. Watch him go through the journey and discover more of his powers than he has ever known. Chapter 7 is up.


Okay, it's mainly about Goku and his powers. There will be little to no romance. This is my first one, and the first chapter is somewhat boring. But that's how it goes! Chapter 7 is up.

Or something along those lines. I guess that irks me the most because most of the stuff that you put in the story could have been said in the ANs.

Oh and it's Seiten Taisen Son Goku or just Seitan Taisen.

The plot is nice and going along well, but it's going quite fast. Try and get a good pace of it, but not too much. The plot is nice and I like it.

Remember just do your best; please don't use the first fanfic excuse. People will flame you for that excuse. For some reason they think it's fun when it's not. I hope that you are not offended. I'm doing this to try and help you. This is constructive criticism and not a flame.
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