Reviews for Twenty Two, Going on Twenty Three
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Legally Positive chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
I listened to the orignal and out in your new lyrics and it works pretty well :) I like it! :D
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Oh, that was so sad... It was great though! I loved this. (: Good job.
Eastmangirl chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
I really liked his fanfic! Keep up the good work!
P.S. You haven't seen the Sound of Music till recently! You poor deprived child.
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
A great story. Very good.
Bardess of Avon chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Ok, well, first of all, I love this oneshot. Seriously.

Second, I'm starting a C2 dedicated to the very few Liesl/Rolfe fics we have here, and I was wondering if you have any objections to my adding this? If you do, please tell me, and if not, thanks!

PirateQueen716 chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
This was so sweet. I really like the rewrite of the song, Liesl growing up and having expierenced the things she only ever sung about. I truly believe she would have still be in love with Rolfe. I thought it was beautiful.

I do not remember any last name for Rolfe. Sorry about that!

Great Work :)
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
liesl always needed to grow up. she longed to be treated like a woman and what all happen with rolfe was just what she needed. excellent story!
books4evah chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
Hmm... Interesting. But just so you know, the Sound of Music was based off a real family, and they went to America. You might already know, but, just wanted to point that out,because you have them in Switzerland.
rikkurox chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Great story, go get em girl! It's great to see her grow up n I always liked Lisel's character, well done!
SilverMoreau chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
I want to congratulate you since you have made a very good revision of 'Sixteen going on Seventeen'. As I was reading the lyrics, tears began to form in my eyes and as I read further, I began to cry. Amazing. Keep it up. Hope you write more!
Maria-Lilly Kon chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
rolfe's last name is Gruber. (well, that's what it says on my DVD anyway.) and i really liked it, it's on my favs!
Allyne Twixt 99 chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
I loved the song - I sang along with it.

Rolfe actually does have a last name in the film: Gruber. It says it in the DVD case - and so I have my proof.

True, Liesl would have grown up during the war. I think, after watching the film, that Liesl was ready to grow up, but just needed a push. She thought she was, when she was with Rolfe, but when he betrayed her, she felt like a child. This would have been a big step.

The ending was a tad sad, but it is unlikely that he would've survived. The second world war was brutal on all sides.

-Agent 101
colorfulsimplicity chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
I loved this...very nicely done :)
ZD87 chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
pretty awesome fic.

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